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Moon Flame


A 30 so year old guy from Sweden. Been a fan of cartoons all my life and a brony since the middle of season 6 /)

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Soarin gets the chance to show what he is made of as a leader of the wonderbolts. But might there be a certain rainbow tailed pony within the Wonderbolts that is taking her eye of the ball a little? Or rather, on him?






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Comments ( 3 )

As a fellow foreigner (non native English speaker) on the site I implore you to contact with an editor. Your grammar is simply terrible. They don't have to be super-ultra thorough but you really should have this fic looked at by some natives.

Um... yes Pipsqueak it's so "friendly" their relationship... :twilightsheepish:

Why was the end so funny? Also, I want more, simply because I wanted Soarin to complete the task he was given AND have the sweet moments with Rainbow Dash. Pleaaaase. I want it to continue. What about the "tragedy"? What about the "sex" tag? Pleaaase.

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