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Daybreaker's takeover

In this story what would happen if princess Celestia gave in and became Daybreaker all of Equestia is in danger will Twilight stop her or will she join the blazing alicorn in her attempts to make ever-lasting day find out on Daybreaker's takeover

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Corruption · 8th Aug 2017 · 1,157 words
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The Sun rises for good · 28th Sep 2017 · 1,686 words
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Jacoboby1

Jacoboby1 #1 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · · Corruption ·

Not bad, but it went waaay too fast and there were spelling and grammer errors here and there. So with a decent editor and a rewrite you could make this work.

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