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And the chaos continues...
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*offers some popcorn*
I made some, so i can share
*shakes a bowl filled with popcorn*
You forgot a quotation mark.
8389943 Nice catch, thanks.
I could only imagine what Discord will say when he gets there.
I think that last joke flew over my head. Her trimmed fetlock looks ball incoming? What exactly is that supposed to mean.
i woner how the wedding will go will chysalis make that mistake cause im sure cadence know twilights a girl
This has got to be the most Pinkie Pie thing ever written.
Only Pinkie would require a caveat like that.
It's adorable how well they know each other by now.
Seriously, these two are adorable together.
The rules of comedy demand that I take this sentence out of context!
I dunno. It was funny, but the stallion gag has kind of become repetitive at this point. She can't even convince her closest friends that she's a she, and it just feels like the whole thing is bogging down without further development. It's becoming one-dimensional.
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You've pretty much summed up why I stopped reading this story by chapter 3.
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This.
Going to give the story another chapter or two but... eh. The joke has run dry. I feel like this story might've been better off as a one-shot but time will tell.
Also feels like a Pinkie tag is needed since so far TwiPie is pretty heavily pushed/indicated but that's mostly irrelevant atm. :3
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Oh, there's places it could go still. Twilight being in the Guard has some potential for shenanigans, too.
And not everypony has to believe she's a she; this is the kind of thing that should haunt her for decades to come. But the ponies closest to her, at the least? I could even see some of them knowingly conspiring to keep it running amongst the ponies outside their closer circle.
But it needs to branch out! Even Tom and Jerry had more than one theme for their gags!
HIlarious! And here I thought Rarity would be the one going for the scandal scene.
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I have to agree. Something needs to happen soon about it, maybe at the GGG? At the very least, her best friends need to be convinced.
For Twilight: I wonder, would lifting your tail for an entire day while there is a vibrator inside your snatch convince anyone? You could even have demonstrations where anypony not convinced can extract the vibrator themselves, witnessing that the illusion is anything but. If that is too much for your public image, you could just do the demonstration in the privacy of your home for your friends.
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I think it is supposed to be "ballin'", which according to Wiktionary, means this:
8390401 Hrrm, odd. Here it literally means a streak of success. I figured it meant the same everywhere. Ugh, stupid English slang strikes again.
Hehe, if they keep it going long enough it might just come true!
Actually, that gives us an idea pondering a crossover in the vein of that Friendship is Witchcraft arc...
To Rarity: how are those measurements stacking up for Twilight's dress-- erm, suit?
Keep going! ;)
Hehe this was fantastic! I'm loving this fic more and more.
Well, this was certainly a nice change of pace for Twilight. I didn't even think of the possibility of a private room for the two, at the start of the chapter, and honestly expected Twilight to have to spend her time grouped in with a bunch of stallions in various stages of more-undress-than-usual (there's passively naked and there's actively naked. Or maybe aggressively naked).
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I can't help but agree with this point.
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That question. It needs an answer with proper descriptions of Twilys reactions and expressions.
8390921 Maybe, maybe... As someone brought up on Carry On movies, Monty Python, and The Goodies; I can definitely say that riding a joke to the very end is a must.
That said, the second part of your post is part of the reason I made this story M instead of T with Sex.
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Not all jokes are created equal, I'm afraid. Additionally, not all mediums are created equal. A movie is a different story than a book, and some jokes need a punchline at the perfect time else it grows stale.
You could do what Twilight said in the answered question this chapter and have half the population accept she is female, but the other half is totally unconvinced. They could form a society, similar to the flat Earth society, that thinks there is a massive conspiracy going or something. This is just a single option: evolve the joke with the story as you see fit and make it glorious. Come up with something magical!
Okay, to some extent I can understand why most of a town could still think that Twilight is a guy. Usually in armor, military cuts and physique, and usually only seen in passing.
But with her close friends it seems much less believable at this point. The "joke" has gotten tired (at least regarding them) and there really isn't a reason for it to continue. It's like telling a running joke that does not have a punchline.
Ouran High School Host Club did this too with it being meant for comedy. The Club knew Haruhi was a girl, but the rest of the school thought she was a boy. They found out in the first episode. But because there was a group that knew, they were able to play off it. This lets the joke have more angles to play off of and can give one joke multiple payoffs, with each character and how they handle things. When you have only two in on it, one being indifferent and the other being "Well, why not?" you get kinda stuck oh having to restart the joke the same way each time you want to extend it.
That aside, I am still enjoying reading this. And I like how the prankster in Pinkie is rubbing off on Twilight (probably literally too)
Practical jokes, the best kind!
Welp, all the stylist stallion had to do was take a peek, even if unintentional, when he was working on Twi's tail.
... was he working on Twi's tail? That would explain how he didn't find out.
Oh well, the ruse continues!
Like this one? Or worse?
*faints*
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I have to agree with that one.
Both statements.
Twilight, My Mom has always said "Things can always get worse" Do you believe in this statement?
I would like to ask cadance what she thinks of the phrase "incest is best put your love to the test" and its application involving aunts and sister-in-laws?
Man, if I had a nickel for every time that has happened to me. I'm starting to think I go to the wrong kind of sauna.
No, scratch that, it's totally the right kind.
Hmm, updates have been approximately monthly the past few, we might be due for more soon.
I'm not saying it has to, just pointing out a trend.
8455197 I may get one done on the weekend, but the vote by my patrons this month was for another story to get all my spare time. We will see; there is a reason I said "sporadic" releases.