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so a pinkie ship huh i dont read to many of those but i think this an interesting enough idea to make me overlook that
Cadence, on a scale of 1-squee, how do you feel about Twilight having a potential marefriend?
... There was something very funny and very wrong in this Chapter, I just can't point out what exactly was what...
At the start of the chapter, I knew Pinkie knew.
At half, I told myself that it would be even better to ship them, even while knowing.
...and there you. This is awesome
Smooth, pinkie. Smooth.
I've always thought TwiPie was one of the better Mane 6 ships. Their personalities are the right kind of opposites that balance each other.
That's ah-dor-ahble!! :D
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I think it's because that, in order for the Elements to function properly, the friendships needed to be built naturally. If Twilight knew, in her mind, that the only reason she had to make friends was to make the McGuffins work then they likely would have only been token relationships. She would just be doing the motions. Ulterior motives do not make good foundations for relationships.
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Royal Canterlot Voice level squee?... I bet that would blow quite a few eardrums.
Oh my, Pinkie is going all in
And of course it would be Pinkie Pie who knows that Twily is not a stallion, who else?
I knew Pinkie would be the first to figure it out, I just knew it.
I think that specific question would've been better asked from Cadence.
Pinkie, huh. Can't say I'm that suprised, she was the only one who didn't get introduced in the chapters beforehand swooning over some Twibutt.
So...
Is Pinkie the main love interest then?
This is good! I want more
To Nightmare Moon
"Where do you see this laughable little show going while we await your glorious return as the true princess of equestria?"
-NewIcy Aurora "Lunatic and thestral"
So, are Pinkie and Twilight going to become an actual couple?
Question for Star Wings: So, what drew you to Roseluck and do you know she has two sisters?
i knew pinkie would know that twilight was a mare but to convincer her to be her coltfriend for a day is a little disturbing esecailly with how pinkie can cook anyone into submission
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"I'm sorry, her Royal Highness is not availalbe-she's busy drawing shipping diagrams and squeeing."
8250332 Please, Cadance is a Princess.
She uses dolls, not diagrams.
Well, now we know why the M rating is in place. Also, the neckbreak pace goes on I see.
The goddamn chapter titles are gonna tell us a story too, aren't they?
8250377 Well, yes. But you might have already heard it...
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Objection! She spent time babysitting Twilight Sparkle (er, she did do that in this reality, right?). Since then she has used dolls, diagrams, and every combination of the two you can imagine, and some that you can't.
This is too good of a chapter. Pinkie blackmailing twilight then turns to a real love connection. I like to see how this will end between them
I bet it going to be nightmare moon or luna who figure it out, or I can see them hitting and crush on twilight......
Overall, I enjoyed the chapter a lot. The romance felt like it came on a little too quick for my tastes, but it still largely seems to be more of a mutual crush/interest than anything, so I'm cool with that. The real problem for me is the one I was worried about with the last chapter: the rest of the M6 mistaking her for a stallion. I hope that it gets resolved quickly, because while it certainly makes for a fun joke it's also the kind of joke that can get stale and start to drag on very fast. Oftentimes, it's one of those cases where the longer it goes on, the more contrived things have to get to keep the gag running.
So...yeah. I'm enjoying it so far and looking forward to seeing where you take this, but hoping this plot point will get out of the way before it becomes more tedious than humorous.
I already can tell this will be a great story, I bloody love it, here have some mustaches 👌
Hm. I guess I guessed wrong.
This a Twipie fic?! AWWWW YEEAHAHHHH!!!
Don't make this story to short.
Reading this, I'm tempted to wonder if Twilight gets misgendered often, and what effect that would have on her. Then I remember this is supposed to be funny and dumb, and stop worrying about it.
I'm hoping that when Twilight tells them all she's not a stallion, no-one believes her.
Rainbow Dash: What is the best prank anypony has pulled on you?
So how will Twilight know about Nightmare Moon in this story and her apparent resurrection?
Pinkie using her cupcakes to secure a marefriend? I call foul... not the cupcakes mind, but using them. They are a tactical level weapon for conversion and coercion, they need to be treated with respect else they are little better than a love poison...
Phh... cute, but not really my fav ship. I think it'd of just been funnier if the two of them were setting up the rest for a prank, maybe even have it last a few more days and include Luna.
i. love. this. chapter. ESPECIALLY the pairing
please tell me this is gonna be a long fic?
Trust Pinkie to make things amusingly convoluted...
Nice chapter, good work.
8250709 I am playing it by ear. I definitely don't plan to stop at the end of S1E2, heck that is where the real comedy starts, but I have no fixed distance beyond that. Once this drops from the feature box I will likely slow the updates down so they don't interfere (more) with my regular writing. You know, "get you hooked and then play out the addiction" kind of thing.
Spike, do you think Rarity is cute?
8250790 I am pretty sure the mares have noticed already.
8250842 They have definitely noticed Twilight. The "being a mare" bit... not so much.
8250850 Nope, I have my phone set to make a particular tone when I get a fimfic email.
8250861 Heh, not me. Writing does tend to enhance your writing speed, after all.
You need to work on contractions, not using hem makes your dialogue and writing feel wooden and stiff.
8250872 That is something I am trying to work on.
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c'mon, In believe in you! Say it with me!
"that's something I'm trying to work on!"
DROP AND GIVE ME TWENTY CONTRACTIONS
8250902 Th... That's... That's somethin'
I amI'm tryin' t' work on...?Not quite twenty, but I got more than you did!
Just the mares?
Oh, that explains it. Kinda.
I have to say that after the strong opening of the first chapter, the subsequent development of each of the M6's crushes felt rushed and not as fleshed out as they could have been. It's still entertaining, though, (plus, I have a pathological obsession with Twinkie), so count me in for the long haul.
So I read through the story twice, excellent story overall btw, but one thing is sorta bothering me; what's with the overall near omission of contractions? ( I.e can not versus can't, I am versus i'm ) is it a stylistic thing or did you just kinda forget?