Dang it! I REALLY want Alex to escape the IMC A-Holes! Then Torture and Kill them brutality for raping her. Then find the Traitorous Blueblood, then Torture and Castrate his Stallion Parts.

Then drag him to Celestia to reveal he is a traitor, and have the evidence to prove it. Then PUNCH that Stupid, Weak-Ass Pacifist, and Cocky BITCH in the face for trusting Blueblood, and thus leaning her to get Raped!!!!!!!

And IF Celestia tries anything dumb or being hostile. Alex will CUT the Stupid "Alliance" with the Idiotic Ponies, declare them Enemy. And then order her Teammates and Soldiers to use their Titans/Weapons to shoot and destroy Celestia and her Girly Castle. And the Ponies will have now have to deal with TWO Human Factions with TITANS now!

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lol, pretty close actually.
Spoilers ->
Alex would have escaped but learned she was left behind when a captured Militia grunt told her everyone abandoned her after they thought she was killed. She joins the IMC out of anger, kills the people who rapped her, and hunts down the Militia. She finds out Celestia kicked the Militia out and ends up killing blueblood out of revenge and decides to take over the castle. The hunt for the Militia would continue in Season 2. Season 2 would have been about the Militia trying to survive and Alex trying to find them. We'd see Alex struggle to work with the IMC and hunt down her friends. She would eventually join the Raptors again and fight the IMC off the planet and foil their attempt to contact the main IMC fleet

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You have got to be freaking kidding me??!!

Basically, I'm very glad that those IMC Rapist Assholes and Blueblood are DEAD!!!! ( Hope they got Tortured and Castrate at least??!!)

BUT, her joining the IMC of all Factions ( The Same People that TOOK over her Home and KILLED her Family??!! I DOUBT she'll will join them. Even IF she is "angry and vengeful" over the "Betrayal". Which is a Stupid reason for her to BETRAY her Friends herself. Hypocrite! ), to kill her only Friends that accidentally forgot to rescue her, because they thought she was killed??!! I DON'T like that!

Plus, even IF she comes back with the Militia and Raptors. NO ONE will trust her anymore. I mean, she betrayed them all to the IMC (possibly killed some of them brutally), and then comes back to make "amends"? She basically Betrayed BOTH sides, and I doubt she'll be trusted anymore?


Plus, I HATE the Militia are running like Fugitives and looking like Cowards! They got Titans for Pete's sake. They could easily threaten the Ponies to NOT break the Alliance or else they will REGRET IT!!!!

I could have done that, and like to see how their WEAK Pony Magic work on MULTIPLE Militia Titans with Giant Guns pointing at them at once!!!!


But the one thing I hated is with Celestia.

Why the F*** did she kicked the Militia out??!! Is she F***ing RETARDED?! Their the Only "Good" Human Faction that were trying to help her helpless Ponies from the IMC. And this is the thanks they get??!! TOTAL BS!!!!! Besides, the Militia got Frickin Guns, and TITANS! They wouldn't LET this Naive, Pacifist BITCH to "kick them out"! Heck, EVEN Luna and the Mane Six WON'T approve of Celestia's Idiotic Decision. Because now, they will have to deal with TWO Human Factions with TITANS, with No Human Assistance.


Celestia makes me so mad, that I want Bad Karma to bite her in her Dumbass Flank!!! IF the Militia is kick out. Then the IMC show up, and EASILY take over Canterlot. And the Ponies lose with HEAVY Losses. And who's to blame for that? Celestia!!!!! The Mane Six, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor, and ESPECIALLY the entire Pony Populace of Canterlot that LOST their Love ones to the IMC. Will DESPISE and HATE her for being a Naive and Idiotic Pacifist Dumbass.

Because, IF she haven't kicked the Militia out. The Ponies wouldn't Lose so badly and could have Won against the IMC, and wouldn't have so many innocent lives lost. Her Little Ponies Blood is on HER HANDS!!!!!


Heck, maybe after this Disaster? That a LOT of Ponies ( Even some of the Mane Six, or All of them, including Twilight. And possibly even Luna, Cadence, and Shining Armor ) will Disown and Dethroned Celestia. And Swear their True Alliance with the Human Militia to FIGHT the IMC?!

Think about that?

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I'm sorry, but that's kind of stupid. Joining the IMC? Because her team "abandoned her"?! She was MIA! That's normal!

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Exactly! She's practically KIA! You find your way back to friendly lines, not join the enemy team!

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She weighed her options. She could try to escape with zero help and maybe get killed in the process Or play two faces and get any intel she could. Maybe even sabotage some stuff. As I said, it sounds stupid writing this here in the comments. It doesn't matter now anyway. As I said in the News chapter, ANYONE has the right to take the story and do WHATEVER they want with it.

I am saddened to know one of the best titanfall stories out there has been canceled. I wish it wasn’t but in the end it was up to you so while I’m sad I can’t be angry at you.

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I am sad as well. I had a lot of hope in this one and it was my first story to receive a lot of praise. Maybe in the future, if no one continues it, I can pick it back up. I have the plot and everything, but I never had the time or drive to write in down.

sigh*

its sad that yet another of the storys i was ACTUALY looking forword to reading the newest update of got canceled....

but i also see your point..so i wont push anything on you... its your rhite to do with your story what you wish...including having someone elce finish it..but atleast thers confirmation that your giving it to others..so thats nice...anyway peace!

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I know that I have last responded to you is from 2 years ago. But did you see what my opinion was? And how I think what should have happened in my opinion?

You have got to be freaking kidding me??!!

Basically, I'm very glad that those IMC Rapist Assholes and Blueblood are DEAD!!!! ( Hope they got Tortured and Castrate at least??!!)

BUT, her joining the IMC of all Factions ( The Same People that TOOK over her Home and KILLED her Family??!! I DOUBT she'll will join them. Even IF she is "angry and vengeful" over the "Betrayal". Which is a Stupid reason for her to BETRAY her Friends herself. Hypocrite! ), to kill her only Friends that accidentally forgot to rescue her, because they thought she was killed??!! I DON'T like that!

Plus, even IF she comes back with the Militia and Raptors. NO ONE will trust her anymore. I mean, she betrayed them all to the IMC (possibly killed some of them brutally), and then comes back to make "amends"? She basically Betrayed BOTH sides, and I doubt she'll be trusted anymore?


Plus, I HATE the Militia are running like Fugitives and looking like Cowards! They got Titans for Pete's sake. They could easily threaten the Ponies to NOT break the Alliance or else they will REGRET IT!!!!

I could have done that, and like to see how their WEAK Pony Magic work on MULTIPLE Militia Titans with Giant Guns pointing at them at once!!!!


But the one thing I hated is with Celestia.

Why the F*** did she kicked the Militia out??!! Is she F***ing RETARDED?! Their the Only "Good" Human Faction that were trying to help her helpless Ponies from the IMC. And this is the thanks they get??!! TOTAL BS!!!!! Besides, the Militia got Frickin Guns, and TITANS! They wouldn't LET this Naive, Pacifist BITCH to "kick them out"! Heck, EVEN Luna and the Mane Six WON'T approve of Celestia's Idiotic Decision. Because now, they will have to deal with TWO Human Factions with TITANS, with No Human Assistance.


Celestia makes me so mad, that I want Bad Karma to bite her in her Dumbass Flank!!! IF the Militia is kick out. Then the IMC show up, and EASILY take over Canterlot. And the Ponies lose with HEAVY Losses. And who's to blame for that? Celestia!!!!! The Mane Six, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor, and ESPECIALLY the entire Pony Populace of Canterlot that LOST their Love ones to the IMC. Will DESPISE and HATE her for being a Naive and Idiotic Pacifist Dumbass.

Because, IF she haven't kicked the Militia out. The Ponies wouldn't Lose so badly and could have Won against the IMC, and wouldn't have so many innocent lives lost. Her Little Ponies Blood is on HER HANDS!!!!!


Heck, maybe after this Disaster? That a LOT of Ponies ( Even some of the Mane Six, or All of them, including Twilight. And possibly even Luna, Cadence, and Shining Armor ) will Disown and Dethroned Celestia. And Swear their True Alliance with the Human Militia to FIGHT the IMC?!

Think about that?