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#SunsetDisgust

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Sunset Shimmer and Starlight Glimmer are on their way to meet Sunset's friends in the Canterlot Mall when Starlight is hit with a familiar urge in an unfamiliar place. Fortunately Sunset's been there before...


Takes place during the third Equestria Girls - Magical Movie Night special, "Mirror Magic", but no spoilers.

TOILET USE WITHIN. Don't read on if you have a problem with that.

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Interesting story, though while we haven't seen any visual confirmation, there does seem to be something that suggests Equestria has indoor plumbing, and that includes toilets.

Comment posted by PonyUpYourBits deleted May 31st, 2017

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Actually, we've had some pretty clear visual confirmation on several occasions in regards to them having indoor plumbing.

We see indoor sinks in houses and hospitals. We see bathtubs with faucets in an episode or two, including one where the faucet is broken and we can see the plumbing in action. We see a western-style toilet and some pipes during Discord's song. We see a water main break when Spike orders them to put off repairing it to avoid interrupting Twilight's nap. We see them make use of both indoor plumbing for a washing machine/steam room and outdoor plumbing for farming when Applejack tries (and fails) to take a day off.

While something like the toilet (from Discord's song in Three's a Crowd) could probably be brushed off as a gag given the context, it's pretty safe to say Equestria's technology does include indoor plumbing.

Very well written :)

8202293 Thanks. I'm really looking for feedback on what I write here because the community is so interesting.

How could Starlight not know what pistachios are? Pinkie Pie actually mentioned them in "Rock Solid Friendship".

8203468 Sorry, I just picked the first green ice cream flavor I could think of (I'm a bit of an ice cream virgin as my favorite flavor is just plain vanilla so I don't know the breadth of what's out there).

As a slice of life story, this was interesting.

I’m mildly squicked by the ending, as I’m rather OCD about washing my hands after using the bathroom.

But that’s just my opinion.

This is bizarre, but it's well written.

The two girls left the restroom, blissfully ignoring the "EMPLOYEES MUST WASH HANDS BEFORE RETURNING TO WORK SIGN" attached to the interior of the door on the way out.

This only works if the two of them work there. And they don’t.

Do I take "I learned the hard way" correctly? Or did she just mean learning what panties were?

I've actually written a fanfic about Twilight's issues with this on her first day too, and peeing her panties twice before getting the hang of it. It was one of my least disliked ones for using a plausible scenario.

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It's contextless. I like to think she had some mishap.

Also it looks like I read that story because I upvoted it at one time.

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So by "mishap", do you mean what I think you mean? :pinkiehappy:

And thanks for the upvote.

Do you have omorashi fetish too or I'm only one?

Sorry for my English

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It's secondary to relief and toilet use.

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Ah okay. I think I like that too. The most when charakter is very very embarassed. But it must be girl, I don't like boys in my fetishes.

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I mean helping with toilet use.

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