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Why can't be with the dragon
I got to say the story is very interesting but I have complaints about how it's going for 1 why couldn't he not form a herd with Twilight and other Mares he's been with a lot of them so far he can even start his on Secret heard some dragons 2 and also what's with the whole bomb thing it must be a very important bomb that they need to go a million years into the future to go back to get this guy how do they even know he's in the future I mean come on that doesn't make no sense and also you need to give him some kind of power like something to do with time and give him back the dragon lord title to oh yeah and make him happy I don't know what he needs last six of them are yours I'm talking about the Mane 6 yes that means Rainbow Dash 2 if you do that with this story I think you'll get a whole lot better and also I think you'll get a lot more readers to oh and he's got to have more sex come on so why does not have a herd here to being with a whole bunch of them I just don't see the point of him not being with a whole bunch of other girls or even some dragons it'll make the store so much better and he gets the control time and space I mean like yeah you need that in the story and make it so much better hope you read this message and you contact me until then I hope you make the story a lot better read this comment El help I might even favor the story.
Just to be clear on something you need to get him and Twilight back together because she died for this guy so yeah they need to be together when I read that one chapter that she sacrificed herself for him but at the end of the day he just said let's be friends yeah I'm sorry you need to have them to be together and give him some Powers if you put a lot more sex and then I'm going to read the story more often you just need help man seriously you need help with this story
I'm sorry how I wrote this but I think he needs to be with other with other girls too and also with dragons and also put maybe he gets with a griffin.
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Thank you for the rapid comments.
I'm kind of writing this more for myself so I can't guarantee you on anything, I'm just going with where the story is taking me. But thanks for the comments and who knows? Maybe things could turn out that way.