• Member Since 7th Jun, 2016
  • offline last seen Apr 27th, 2020

RedRandom


I can't tell what i'm going to do, so you can't either

Comments ( 11 )

Hey, Red... guess what...? FIRST!!!

Oh yeah?!...well..uh, SECOND!!!

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Hey, guys ... wanna know something...? THIRD!!!

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He means 'Last of the Authors working on the Paradise Lost stories to comment' not 'Last to comment period'.

I usually dislike poor spelling and grammar, but with this, the unkempt feel of the writing really drives home that this is a hand written journal. Loving the story so far, keep up the great work!

8130308 why, thank you my friend...and good luck with your story as well~

YxB

I like it mate. Keep it up. Also Red...Its still not time yet...be patient and keep watch, you mayt see the Best Kept Secret when the time is right~
-YxB 'Till The Bitter End'

Author's Note:
Again, this chapter is in association with Maziodyne, this chapter was actually written by him instead of me, as you can see with the most likely better grammar and spelling. Please, give him some love~

As I said on his fic, Maziodyne is boarder line obsessed with correct spelling and grammar

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