A man from our world is sent to the Griffon Empire in gear and a personality that is not of his own as he tries to find a way home while protecting his new friends from an insane Umbrum warlord. Displaced
I usually dislike poor spelling and grammar, but with this, the unkempt feel of the writing really drives home that this is a hand written journal. Loving the story so far, keep up the great work!
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He means 'Last of the Authors working on the Paradise Lost stories to comment' not 'Last to comment period'.
I usually dislike poor spelling and grammar, but with this, the unkempt feel of the writing really drives home that this is a hand written journal. Loving the story so far, keep up the great work!
8130308 why, thank you my friend...and good luck with your story as well~