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Gizmo Hibiki


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This Is AWESOME.......Oh I can't wait to see what happens next, please say that the Mane 6, the Princess and other background Ponies are still alive and not Zombies too, that would suck really bad, also is Dainn a Zombie or did he survive and still alive?

Let's see where this goes.

Okay, this story looks interesting. I liked how Frank is going to team up with Featherweight and I laughed that Frank got sent to Equestria just when he was about to give his signature to a groupie. Hope to see more chapters coming soon.

Very well... The setting has been set, and it seems to be that Equestria is overrun by a Zombie plague... Let's see how this will work out, and how the plague happened in the first place...

Keep it up, Gizmo. Instant favorite!

Huh, well this is starting off better than expected. I hope you have a good plan on why the outbreak started. I can't wait for another chapter!

Hey, is frank gonna be a pony, or stay human? That's what I wanna know. This starting to look like an awesome story. Please let button mash be alive! And be a bad ass zombie killer with all those moves he learns from video games:rainbowdetermined2:

He's covered wars, you know.

So thanks for that.

Now this is a original way to write FOE, I'll be pretty sad if the mane 6 and the princesses died or are already dead.

"So, Frank West, ya here to get your next big scoop?"

"No way, pal. I'm not here for work. This," Frank said as he jumped off the Pegasus, "is my VACATION!"

I never played dead rising 1, but played 2. So far, this story is awesome lol.

Happy to see another chapter of this story. Man, Feather Weight will need Frank's help throughout the fic as he seems to be very inexperienced when fighting zombies. Overall, I loved this chapter. Hope the next one comes soon.

Go to see this is still alive.

That stallion at the end. Is he insane? Or is he against the caribou?

Very nice chapter, buddy! It's the best one so far. Let's hope that the third chapter won't take as long as this one, though...

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They are, no they're not, no he's not, spoilers. Yes in that order.

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Come on, this is Dead Rising. Their virus spread because people wanted more beef. The reason here is gonna be ridiculous, but also makes sense. :ajsmug:

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Frank is still a human. Also Button Mash.....I might think of something for him...

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Both. But you already knew that. ;)

When's the next update coming up

Octavia went up to him and smiled. "Where did you learn to speak like that?" Frank smirked. "Just a few words I picked up from a buddy I met during movie production, nothing too fancy." Featherweight chuckled. "Well, at least it worked. All we can do now is plan for our next move."

Break up this dialogue. The dialogue is blended together like a group of people speaking over each other.


As it is written it can be read:

Octavia approaches him and smiles. Frank says "Where did you learn to speak like that?"

Featherweight chuckles "Just a few words I picked up from a buddy I met during movie production, nothing too fancy."

"Well, at least it worked. All we can do now is plan for our next move" Frank replied.

To clarify: The confusion is caused by the grammar marks. Without line breaks a reader can't always know whether the emotive descriptor is associated with the dialogue prior to or after it.


Dialogue divided and marks reduced:

Octavia went up to him smiling "Where did you learn to speak like that?"

Frank smirked "Just a few words I picked up from a buddy I met during movie production; nothing too fancy."

"Well, at least it worked. All we can do now is plan for our next move" Featherweight chuckled.

or just break the line like:

Octavia went up to him and smiled. "Where did you learn to speak like that?"

Frank smirked. "Just a few words I picked up from a buddy I met during movie production, nothing too fancy."

Featherweight chuckled. "Well, at least it worked. All we can do now is plan for our next move."

Regardless of grammar, the point is to separate each speaker.
With that aside I also just noticed that the group of survivors started banging on the door and yelling without actually knowing if the house was occupied or even locked.

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Done and done. Thanks for that.

I like, that this fanfics is alive

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