• Member Since 7th Jun, 2016
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RedRandom


I can't tell what i'm going to do, so you can't either

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Alicornhood...

Immortality...

Perfection...

These are words that Twilight heard when she woke up in a dark, cold Laboratory that she found herself imprisoned in. The words repeating over and over, the sense of insanity in the air as her whole body was useless. She couldn't use her magic, she couldn't use her wings, no one was coming to save her. But why? Why was she here? Who had captured her and why? Well, she's about to find out... and Equestria... Equestria may never be the same afterwards.

Rated Teen just in case, will change if I have to.
Proof-read by EverfreePony

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I want a sequel.

8245866
You shall have your sequel! ...after some time.

8246186
That's evil... I like it.

While certainly interesting, it feels awfully incomplete — like a prologue would on its own.
Thus I can't give a final judgement without a sequel, however what I saw so far has me intrigued.

8526611
Thank you, that was actually the sort of feeling I was trying to convey.