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Bladewolf


A gamer of passion, a writer of hobby, and reader enthusiast. I'm a true casual at life.

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This story seems interesting. Consider it followed.

So, when did Sunset turn into Electro?

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I must be missing the reference here as I totally don't understand.

Will Luna be playing a major role in the story?

Will Luna be playing a major role in the story?

8127061 It just seems like all the electric devices seem to short circuit or blow up after Sunset mentions or touches them. I just used Electro because he was the first electric-power based hero/villain that came to mind.

Someone or something must really hate technology.

I cant believe sunset was still eating her pretzel :rainbowlaugh: also great chapter can't wait to read more:twilightsmile:

Wait, is this a crossover? Trixie is a REAL MAGICIAN?!

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I didn't label is as a crossover. Its more an adaptation and inspired by type of thing written in a way that it might be an expansion on magic of the EQG world. Also Trixie is always a real magician!

Ok, This Trixie is way too obnoxious. I would think she would take something like this more seriously, and not be so bossy and condescending.

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Facing your darker self in the dream world and defeating it to gain power. Persona, or Mage the Awakening?

A nightmare that can only be defeated inside the dream? shivers This is sounding awfully familiar.

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So, is it more of a Tantabus thing?

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Hmm. It takes from tabletops, Inception, the tantabus does give it a canonical precedent of sorts, and such things. It's also just cause it seemed fun to do and write.

This chapter is hella disorienting, I don't hate it , I just feel like I was dropped out of MLP and into Saints Row. But hey I'm game for it , let's bash some heads save some people and rename the characters :-) legit I'm good with this.

I must confess I share reboot's sentiment. That chapter confused the heck out of me. ^^ It was... interesting to read.

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Yeah I know, hence why people will either stick around and see where it goes or hate it. If it helps unconfuse y'all it's the dream (or nightmare). As for why and how everything goes the way it does... that's up to read. Thanks for reading and/or giving it a chance.

Rd seems like the kind of person who'd leave a voicemail like that. If these dreams are just now becoming lucid, it may not be a problem sunset can flick off, consider this followed.

That's actually pretty nerve wracking in my opinion, a boogie man that you can only see out the corner of your eye?

Sounds like the most terrifying eye floater ever,

Nice battle description, also im surprised twilight could lift something thart heavy even with magic.

It also seems that trixie has learned a trick or two as well. Are there more people outside of our heroines that have magic?

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Magic~ Also yes there will be.

I wonder which magic would win if pitted against each other, human or equestrian?,

Imagining the feel of something forcing you down is enough to make me nautious, I wonder what its like the of lemon zest's head..

Interested to see how this lines up, cant wait for the next chapter.

Probably WAY to early to ask, but i'm curious to as what would happen if they left lemon alone and did nothing.. glad I took time to read this, I actually tried tackling an idea like this but I don't think i've planned it out as well as you. So i'm hoping to learn new tricks by reading, please continue if possible btw.

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A bit, or lot, early yeah. It'll come up eventually is all I'll say.

... I can't picture Lightshow's costume without the spiky orange sunglasses now.

(putting my hands over my eyes) No, I can't look. Someone tell me what happens next!

Well, that last bit was a twist I didn't see coming.

Screams came from the speakers along with violent chainsaw noises and the sickening sound of flesh being torn apart. Luna smiled.

The beautiful sound of ending lives. Luna's heart jumps from joy.

Okay, Luna has a really unhealthy appetite for horror movies; you're supposed to be scared or grossed out by them, not finding joy in the killings. It'll be interesting to see if Sunset and Twilight find out about the coven or not.

I am thoroughly enjoying this systembuilding. Definitely unique, but reminds me of persona and OWoD Mage. Eagerly waiting for more.

Did you put horror in as a genre for this story, because I am starting to get terrified of all the risks that were mentioned in this chapter.

Keep. It. Up.

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Not horror, but might add SoL with all this chit-chatting. Haha.

Whats sunsets ringtone!

“Yes, Shimmer?”
“That’s called kindness.”
“Don’t confuse Trixie with your weird friendship emotions.
Lol to funny

Shimmer crew lol. I hope sunset keeps fire magic!

So, let's review:

• Human magic
• Best Shadowbolt
• Sciset overtones
• An Endbringer battle is considered easy mode.

You absolutely have my interest. Dearly hoping you come back to this story.

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Not sure if I ever will. I did write a Worm thing a while back though so yeah, EB fight was inspired.

God i love strange dreams.
Especially battle ones.

Trixie laughed. “Keep that up and you can be my friend too, Shimmer.
“That doesn’t sound so bad.”

Lol! Only the best get that honor

Sonata!

And what a group of characters

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