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Surprisingly sweet and hot! Good work!
Fleur trying to get Twilight? Yup, it's gonna be a good one.
Shouldn't this be marked with the AU tag? Nothing here sounds like anything from Friendship Games and Sci Twi's relationship with Crystal Prep or its students.
Or I totally missed it 😲.
That ending makes me want to see more
such a lovely little story.
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It mentions chs, so it is a tad confusing.
Kinda-sorta-really hated Lemon Zest in this, but I really liked this story. Short, sweet, lovable, I adored it.
This was an amazing read! Wonderful work!
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I mean, if a beautiful woman walked up to you and wanted to be with you, would you believe it?
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Or I'm just kinda spitballing this whole thing as I go. Not a story to be taken seriously.
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All three of them are meant to display the various stages of maturity you see in college. Some kids never grow up.
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This was some good stuff, as always. Can’t wait for more
thanks to you, this popped into my head X3
years later Lemon Zest is going to bump into Fleur, and she's going to joke about Fleur dating Twilight, and Fleur agrees, she finds it hard to believe that the two of them dated, the two of them talk till someone comes with a toddler, Lemon sees that it's Twilight, before she can anything Zest rushes over kissing Twi on the cheek, then the toddler, Lemon watches as she's putting 2 and 2 together, as Fleur walks back with a grinning, as the 3 get too Lemon, Lemon shouts "you married that nerd?!"
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I mean, if a beautiful woman walked up to you and wanted to be with you, would you believe it?
Yes
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Well, you've got confidence at least.
Pffft. I can get around flirty and lewd Fleur.
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??
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That is to say, I like it.
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Oh, OK. Wasn't sure what to make of your statement cause I'm thicker than this story's oblivious nerd.
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Well, I mean, I gave you a follow :D
Will check out your other stories when I have more time :)
This is really good.
Hey, who put these feels here?
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I try.
This is freakin amazing! Every nerds dream come true haha.
Seriously amazing job bud!
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I would imagine that I would be skeptical just like Twilight was. Also poor Twilight keeping her guard up for so long, thankfully Fleur wouldn't let Twilight escape.
Lemon does strike me as this kind of idiot.
This is one of my new favorites.
Well, for what was originally supposed to be a one chapter story, this is nice! Even standing alone, it's pretty nice.
This is too Accurate to be funny
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What in particular do you refer to?
Okay, I loved this. Funny, cute, sexy and some great sex scenes. I loved Fleur and Twilight interacting like they did, and how clueless both were towards the other.
Well... I'm always a sucker for well-written Fleur de Lis romance, even it's- shudder -humanized.
The whole setup - every situation so far - is wonderfully comedic, and I love it. The hot chick swoons for the dork?! No wai!!1!!11one!!
I almost fear to keep reading out of imagining how it might go wrong (like Twilight getting mad at Fleur for not paying attention and taking the studying seriously, when Fleur was really just getting lost in her voice).
But I have high hopes the author wouldn't be that cruel to us and that things will all work out. Such excellent writing.
This is very well written and engaging. Great story and cute storyline.
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I mean, I do like women.
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Only one way to be sure!
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I try to write them like people. It feels a little more genuine that way.
My worry was misplaced.
Simply marvelous.
What a lovely story. I'm not usually much for reading romance (let alone such eroticism) but I found this immensely enjoyable. It helped that you wove such a wonderfully charming love story to get us properly invested in the character dynamic to make the payoff that much sweeter. That makes it leave a much grander impression than the usual "smut for the sake of smut" stories.
Top notch work. A+.
Now all you've gotta do is tweak the names (for copyright reasons) and figure out how the Amazon Self-publishing feature works.
I love the ending.
I like this so far. Fluer is absolutely wonderful. One certainly doesn't think of the picture perfect girl having trouble with expressing her self to someone she likes. (Appearances are not everything after all) Definitely going to continue with this one.
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I felt like there should be some insecurity. Do they like her- or how she looks?
And would you even be able to tell the difference?
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I'm sure that question comes to mind repeatedly.
Holy lost equilibrium! I'm off balance after reading that.
Please 🙏 tell me what is going to be a continuation of this story.
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Nah. Don't feel like there's any more story to tell.
Here I have the impression that you are using the word " beau" which is generally translated in English by "pretty" or "beautiful" in its rarer and literary sense "paramour" or "sweetie".
First of all, in written French, the vast majority of adjectives are accorded differently in the feminine and masculine (even when they are pronounced the same), "beau" being the masculine, "belle" the feminine (as in Sweetie Belle, which gives a very particular meaning to the name of the CMC unicorn).
Secondly, we don't say her "beau", rather his "belle" (to stay in the straight "standard") because in our patriarchal society it is normal to reduce a girlfriend to her beauty, but men are better than that.
Well, that was the nerd comment of a dysorthographian who can't write a sentence straight without the automatic corrector. Just because I hit the nail on the head doesn't mean I don't like the story, on the contrary.
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Welcome to American slang.
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Because it's slang and not a way to recall Fleur's French origins? Well, fair enought.
Now I'm wondering if it's from Cajun, Quebecois or if it's a direct borrowing of the word, and how this question of accord could have disappeared, but I guess you're not a linguist.
Great story 😊
Love the ending 🤣🤣😂
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1 American slang.
2 it isnt just women described as being "his beauty" and if thats all you here I hate to say it but the people you hang out with are misogynistic. The number of times I heard a dude described as "her hunk" or "her stud" in highschool alone was well into the hundreds if not the thousands. Hell, my mom describs my dad as her hunk to her friends, or at least she used to. Havent been around during a girls night since I left the house. Humans rate eachother based on their beauty, because of biology. If someone is in a relationship, because monogamy is the norm, they are generally refered to as being the property of the other. And if their partner is a catch, terms like belle, beau, hunk, and stud are generally applied. She is his, he is hers. She is hers, she is hers. He is his, he is his. Thats how a relationship is supposed to work, you belong to the other because you have given yourself to the other and they to you, and thats how normal people describe them.