I have a question are you going to rewrite all the stories or just this one
But other than that great story

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mostly it's the Mane 6. I felt like I rushed a couple of the stories so NineTailBeastBoy and I are going to re-write the stories and make them a little bit longer and more enjoyable

Great story bro

Rarity’s story out of the mane six was longest you have writter with two chapters.

i hope for a sequel there's lots of good stuff to expand on

I'm just curious but will the humans meet most of the families of the Mane 6? (Twilight, RD, Pinkie, Rarity, Fluttershy) I only ask because of all the fics only one has a family meeting the human

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Good point there. I'll see to it that the other humans meet the Mane 6's families

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that's totally awesome, do you have more fic(s) planned or not sure yet?

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yes, after the Mane 6 are finished, I'm proceeding with some newer anthro waifu stories. But, I'm not sure whether to make Gilda or Daring Do the next story to write, so I leave it up for you guys to decide

I'm going to be honest. I preferred the story as one chapter.

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I can respect that.

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Exactly! It makes no sense!

Adorably cheesy. Love it. Thanks for creating and sharing.

Genus...WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO THE ORIGINAL ONE!!!!!

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The original one felt rushed and I felt like the main character was too Gary Stu-ish, so my editor and I re-made it.

Uh... this dose not make any sense.

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What I mean to say is when I first wrote this story on my own, the whole story seemed flawed. The character was too perfect, like he didn't freak out in the beginning, not even when he first encountered Twilight when he arrived. The whole love at first sight thing just didn't seem to fit well and the automatic one month time skip in that one chapter felt like it was too ill-timed on my part. My editor and I decided to re-write the whole story and make it three chapters long like my other latest anthro wiafu stories. This way, their human lovers and the ponies can build a steady relationship and try to get to know one another

But what about the timelines?

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I'll make sure the timelines are fixed when I re-edit the Anthro Waifu special later on. But after that, the rest of the Anthro Waifu stories will remain the same so you don't have to worry about anymore changes.

Ok, but I hate to see you change my own relationship with Fleur de lis though, I like my own life with her.

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The Fleur De Lis story will stay the same

Thanks for not changing it, it means a lot to me.

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no problem

Hope these story's get a ending to them

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Let's get started then. I got a friend with an engineering degree, his cousin works for DARPA, and a guy I went to school with has loads of money. Time to figure this out.

Found the latest fic of this serious the amount of "sequel to this fic" links I had to go through was crazy! XD alright if this series turns out any good Ill definitely be reviewing everything. :)

I'll be honest, minus the many grammatical errors I found and odd things placed every so often, this story isn't that bad of a read. I do hope your writing gets better the more you progress, and I do think you deserve a like for your troubles.

Good job and good luck with all your other stories.

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thanks a bunch

Great story

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Nah maybe earth is super big and actually has hundreds of billions of ppl. This should be the case

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How different?

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I agree. It’s like paradise and heaven. If there’s such a thing to go there, I would stay there permanent.

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Don't forget her brother and sister-in-law. Oh yeah, and her niece.

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dude, I know about them

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Okay, just thought you forgot to mention them.

Bro, do you realize how many goddamn stories I went through, how many sequels I went through, to find the beginning?
Do you realize the literal UNIVERSE you've created??
How LONG this series is?
How many NAMES I'm gonna have to come up with??

It's glorious.
Just fucking glorious.

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I'm glad you like it

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Bro, I literally JUST finished this one, and frankly, it was really well written....

Also, damn, your writing went from cute and wholesome to....... holy fuck man....

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thank you.

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No problemo man, you gonna go places.

ver la secuel sera como ver la secuela de marvel XD

It took me over a god fucking damn MONTH to find the start of this universe. You are a literal GENIUS my guy

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lol, thanks.

This was alright but I felt it went by way too fast, and I get the time skip kinda helps with that, but in a few paragraphs they go from first kiss to sex to wanting to be parents right off the bat?

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Let's just say, they had fallen for each other since they first met a month ago.