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Adsimulaticius
English is not my first language but I try very hard.
Adsimulaticius
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This initial paragraph literally is meaningless... I have absolutely no idea what it is trying to say. You really, REALLY need to get an editor, almost the entire story is this impossible to read. If English is your second language, this goes double. If it is not, then slowly read your story aloud - that should give you an idea of how the story is going.
best cover art ever
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I have to agree. I've tried as hard as I can to understand what you have written here, but none of these sentences actually make any kind of grammatical sense...
Sigh, another story ruined by poor grammar.
There are few stories that can match the pinnacle of this truly glorious story. Every word is carefully crafted in order to flow like water. Every character speaks with the same consistency that they do in the actual show. Every little detail is done in a way that makes this one of the most absorbing, deep and emotionally compelling pieces of fiction I have ever read. To call this mere fanfiction would be an insult to fiction itself and would be spitting on Edgar Allan Poe himself. To say that this is the best that Fimfiction has to offer is a massive understatement. This story challenged my perception on reality, shook me to my core and ultimately made me a better man.
This is not a fanfiction. This is an experience.
9/11 still better than A Matter Of Genetics.
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Yeah, well, how far and bringing with every spectacular horrible?
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I nodded, knocking my sculpture is enough, maleer and annoying occasion shortly mouth again.
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Twilight said with a sharp icy and he'd appreciation on the table.
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I noticed a bit lovely he wouldn’t take through mare year.” He glanced down at the mood for some break you, I get things let’ll come each other,
Oh my gosh you guys. Taking advantage of the auto-post moderation feature!
Really, really terrible of you. All the poor souls that tried to read this expecting coherence to last longer than the end of the sentence. Also, shame on all you upvoters for being in on the joke and not saying anything about it!
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Approval speaks about automatic didn't know two stories published.
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/601558/
How to write so you can get the story approved worked very hard. You will be eligible for automatic approval.
I would like to ask the author of this wonderful story to add some chapter names. :)
This fic is fairly weird. It's all dialogue, it's hard to follow, and nothing really makes any sense. It all feels weirdly processed and attached through similar themes only. It's hard to get immersed in a story like this with that in mind, leaving only questions that can't be answered.
Worst of all, the spells aren't even named.
is 'this simple changeling' smiling through the middle of the door ever going to confess? We never find that out, either. Is that Cherilee?
Google Translate?
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I... I don't know what to say about these
Google Translate isn't always your friend, m8
8055171 I mean, it had to be manually approved because this is the only story on this author's account.
That says more about the approval process than it does for this fic.
This is the most inspiring story I have ever read on Fimfiction. Never give up!
Starting to get a handle on syntax, at least part of the way. Got me to laugh pretty good a few times there. I hope that your English gets better and better cause this'd pretty good I think if everything was translated normally. Don't give up man, I look forward to any other stories you are going to write.
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A new story is now out!
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Woot!
By the look of it, I would say that someone wrote this, then ran it through a translation program, maybe Google Translate, and written it word-for-word. No wonder it doesn't make sense...