Some things do NOT match. Oil and Water, Oil and Fire, Alcohol and Bets, and Alcohol and Magic. Sad to say, was it the latter two combinations that occured one fateful night when a sad man goes to a bar for and meets a sad, and strange, woman.
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Final word tally. 80.207 words. Enjoy the Abyss as it stares back.
>80,225 words
As in, who needs sleep anyway? I certainly don't.
You mad bastard.
It's nearly midnight, I have school tomorrow and a few bits of unfinished shit.
But I gotta read this
*See word count for ch: 15*
Sorry, what?
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haa.... one sitting... take that, 80k words... 3-4 hours of reading... yay....
*evil laughter* you think your word count can defeat us. How shallow of you
a epic chapter for a epic story I love this story no mater what it brings me happiness and good music to lisen to
9244913 You are an absolute mad lad, but...
...80k words is chump change for me when I start to read.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
Good lord man! 80k+ words for just one chapter. There are some completed fics that don't even breach that number as a whole. Damn.
This is a good but dark chapter. I am guessing that Maleficus will be making or finding a new race each time the Blood Moon rises?
Sleep is for the weak
Saw the next chapter had been uploaded and thought "cool i can read that after this story" then promptly noticed the word count and decided the other story could wait now its almost 5am it took me 4 hours to read this but it was worth it im just sad that i need to wait for another chapter now
This chapter was certainly something else. A hodgepodge of dark themes, humor, Sadness etc. Whats really entertaining is the obvious growing affection Celestia is getting for each 'identity' he crafts. Certainly going to be awkward when confession time hits.
I rarely comment but this absolute shitstorm of emotional waves is crazy this is 10/10. but ima have yoink a point back for the spelling errors 9/10 otherwise can't wait for the next one you mad man you! (>-_-)>=# <[~-~<] puff puff pass.
A Simply beautiful chapter, a few errors here and there but not a concern. Took me a solid 2 to 3 hours to read, I regret nothing
Holy....just realized this updated. And how long the chapter was.
It's going to be a good ride.
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It was. It was 5 hours of uninterrupted goodness. Can't wait for more epicness. Also, liked the skeleton fight, it was pretty cool. Even if this chapter is, as you say, 'fucked up' I think that it's fantastic. But if you're really concerned about how you wrote this chapter, why don't you take a couple days break? It won't hurt to rest your mind from writing. Now I'm heading to bed. It's 6 a.m. here.
For the love of all that is pony... This was SOOOO much more hardcore than any other thing Ive read in a story thats not a historical record of tragedies. That dragon and the pregnant mare... Im deeply concerned, but have a very much increased respect for you. It took balls to add that, and it actually makes this story a lot better. War isnt as innocent as everyone likes to write it as, and your dedication to all the gory details adds an extreme level of immersion to the story and makes it all so much more real. Id say 10/10, but its safe to say that you've far surpassed that mark.
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Thank you, hope this new chapter I made will get your heart pumping as well. It is quite... unique.
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Thank you, I was going with a darker side of Equestria for this story. and in this latest chapter, I kind of realized just how dark it was getting. Hopefully I will get the next chapter to be less... bloody.
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Thank you for the compliment, hope you enjoy the largest monster of a chapter I have ever written. 80k words in less then two months was... interesting to write.
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Considering that most of that stew was Starswirl? I'd say it was the beard that made you choke.
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Thank you, the new one is much bigger. And a lot more bloody. You have been warned.
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And I repeated say, the olden speech is not something I am taking serious. I am just playing around with it. And it will be gone from the story within the next couple of chapters. As we are FINALLY approaching the point where we can leave that matter of my story behind us.
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Yeah. I know.
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Thank you and yeah, hit quite a big twist when writing that chapter. Had to break it up into two chapters.
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This is one of my better chapters and I am very proud of it. I had a very emotional time writing it myself and I am very glad that my readers have more often then not enjoyed it. So thank you for the compliment. The relationship between Maleficus and Laur lasted for about 1 night, not much to build a relationship on. Celestia and Malefiucs are at the moment sworn enemies, with Maleficus being a reluctant foe due to Celestia's anger and misguided emotions. When she meets him in disguise, she becomes friend with his alternative personas, but that does not mean she likes Maleficus, as she does not know that he were those ponies.
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Some of the chapters will have monotone feelings to them. But I try to make the approaching fights and discussions flow easily through the story. And though I do not see the Second Clash as a boring chapter, do I not really mind, it just means I will have to make a better effort for the next chapter. And the feud between Celestia and Maleficus is one of the core elements of this particular story. And it will take a lot of effort for them to cease fighting. but I will not speak of it anymore as I do not want to reveal too much.
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I do not see the joke but I do hope you are still enjoying the story. Especially with this latest chapter of mine being a monster in size and content.
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Thank you, the word counter seems to be faulty. 80.225 words. I finished it 00:39 AM Swedish time.
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Geez just read it tomorrow. No need to stay awake because of my chapter, get some sleep.
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*Pats AdamAperture on the shoulder* Good work soldier, get some rest.
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Whose talking about defeating you guys? I am just driving you crazy. Not the same thing.
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And a lot of blood and gore to enjoy as well I take it? Well, glad you are enjoying it.
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We're all a little crazy in this place. I am just driving others nuts alongside my own decaying sanity. So enjoy.
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Heh yeah. This chapter was insane, and I am not even including the content. The amount of words I wrote last Friday was just insane.
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No spoilers. Thanks for the compliment though.
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Sleep is for the living!
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And I am sad that I need to wait for another good comment. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, I hopefully will have a new chapter up before December but I am not making any promises.
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Oh you got no idea. Mostly because I won't be telling you.
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Your comment was kind and yet powerful in its message. Yet the amount of words lowers it down to an 11 out of 10 score. You pass.
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Thank you. Hope you will enjoy the next chapter as well once I have it finished.
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I am going to take a break. Well sort of. But mostly I am just going to try and not make things so gory for the next chapter. Glad you enjoyed it though.
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Thank you, your comment surpasses 10/10 score as well. And yeah, it took me a lot of efforts to not delete that part when I read it. Doesn't help me feeling bad for it though. But still, thank you for enjoying the chapter.
I call plot armor
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Actually I rolled a 1d100 for each of the important ponies of the fortress. It was about 20 of them. 10 of which were under ground. So I rolled with a percentage chance of survival at full health or survival with bad or light injures, or dead.
Dead, I need to roll 65 or more for those on the roof. 85 or more for those below ground. 6 of those on the roof died. No one beneath the ground died.
Survives but is badly injured. I need to roll 35 or less for those on the roof, 70 or less for those beneath the castle. Rock Steady was the only one who rolled this.
Survives with light injuries I needed to roll 25 or less for those on the roll and 50 for those underground. NO ONE GOT THIS ONE.
Survives without any kind of injures I needed to roll 10 or less for those on the roof and 40 or less for those under ground.
And I rolled 34, 31, 12, 21, 34, 25, 04, 01, 11 and 14 for those underground. I rolled 75, 82, 87, 93, 99 and 100 for those six who died on the roof. And for those who survived, I rolled 01, 02 and 10 . While Rock Steady rolled 30.
It was a fun event. I mean, seriously, it inspired me to make a very interesting role playing session for my game of Drakar och Demoner, which in english means Demons and Dragons, which is NOT a cheap copy of Dungeons and Dragons, well not any longer, it is an original designed game with races like a Duck race that looks like Disney's Donald Duck, Wolf people who look like tailed worgen from warcraft, classic dwarves, elves, halflings and the regular vanilla humans.
But I am getting off track.
To put it simple. It was not the Plot armour, it was RPG Dice Roll Armour, which all slightly experienced roleplayers and game masters know, always seems to be more likely to kill you then save you.
Of the other 400 ponies on the top of the castle, less then 30 % actually survived. And that's not even counting those who died inside the castle, which was almost as much as those on the roof and towers.
So yeah, no plot armour.
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Thank you for the explanation i didn't realize this story was THAT in depth
Best Oc name ever...
Took me 5 hours but it's done, somewhat altogether great chapter (that one part though...). Great music choices btw.
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Ok, onward to the next chapter!
holy shit! that damn Eidolon gave me all of the chills! that thing's gonna haunt the most badass of my dreams!
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That is an interesting method to make choices, (Note to self: use d20 to help make choices on how something turns out on story)
And now, to talk with Luna about how he nearly destroyed himself again if it was not for her efforts and watch anime.
Seriously... Are the elements cursed? Or is too much coincidence that after Twilight took the elements when Nightmare Moon returned she had not a moment of free time with super bosses until she returned the elements?
Another great chapter
worth the wait, surprised the fallen didn't reveal to celestia, maleficus involvement she no doubt spin it in a bad light anyway, like he used vile sorcery to kill the dragon lord so he could kill the pony of canterlot himself later etc Stallion of Torment suffer no rivals
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I also fixed those spelling errors you mentioned. Thanks.
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You're Welcome.
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Heh I thought it was funny too. But for a much more funny and nostalgic reason. *Hums a strange but very familiar theme music* Care to share your reasons for why you like it so much?
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Thank you, sad to hear it was not entirely to your liking. But hopefully it did not prevent you from enjoying it.
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Indeed!
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Hehehe glad you enjoyed it. I actually based the Eidolon of a certain boss in Dark Souls. Only much bigger and in a pony like shape.
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I recommend 1d100 to roll in your hand rather then a dice roller. Just take two 10 sided dice and pick one to be the single digit number and the other to be the double digit number, unless you have one premade with double digits.
Results of 0 0 on both dice is a 100. Decide first if you want Low or High results to be bad. Then decide how difficult it is in categories form no chance to, slightly a chance, to possible chance, to an average to a great chance. It all depends on the situation. I prefer to keep it in the liens of Dead, Badly Injured, Injured or Not Injured, well for those important ponies that might die in the scenes I write.
This is just a recommendation however, you can do it however you wish to do so.
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Another great review/comment.
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Well the name Maleficus did not fit into the lyrics of the song. And the Eidolon did not speak his name as they were too busy wreaking a certain dragon's face and ass with their collective bone hooves and claw.
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yeah i guess his name is like orange in a rhyme, only work when singing about murdering him for the ponies
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Oh i loved the chapter,that one part of it was just a smudge on the crystal castle.
This was a nice chapter. I only hope Celestia starts to forget her grudge or it will be a sad day when Luna and her mother returns to scold her. O and Celestias face when she realizes that all ponies she has been taking a liking to was her nemesis,,, priceless.
»2:49
Well, I'm done with this.
Sleep is for the weak, but alas - The flesh is weak.
The Machine is strong. We must purge the weak, hated flesh and replace it with the blessed purity of metal. Only through permanence can we truly triumph, only through the Machine can we find victory. Punish the flesh. Iron in mind and body. Hail the Machine
... What I was talking about? Eh.
Awesome chapter, as always.
A master as come, and just said fuck you I am to good for small chaper, I do 80k just for fun. A true master piece
Legendary chapter! Yes parts of it messed up, but necessary for this darker version of equestria. I eagerly await the next chapter!
NOOOOOO!!! IT CANNOT END YET!!
I wanted to read more
It wasn't even all that much to read
Also, this song seems good for a large part of the chapter
Took me most of the day, on and off reading this. Thank you.
So it appears that a lot of my story had been deleted or not saved when I had been writing it. Hopefully the update I just made completes it better.
It was the scene when Talos flew up to the top of the tower to face Celestia, and meet Achilles instead.
And when Maleficus knocked on the door and was let inside the eatery. So yeah, soemhow those two moments were gone.
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Or pears.
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Good to know.
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*Shrugs while writing something down in a notepad.*
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Only priceless as long as no one charges money for the pictures.
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Oh just your regular stuff. Nothing to worry about. Machines spirits need freedom of speech as well.
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Thank you master of comments.
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Thank you for the comment, hopefully the next chapter will be just as good. But a lot less gory.
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You good sir, suck at motivating a writer. But yeah that song is one of my favorites of Hammerfall, but it didn't really fit into the story's scenes.
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Took me about a month and a half to write this story. Thank you for the comment.
Fuck this chapter was thicc.
From the bottom of my heart, thank you.
I recently lost my grandma and as I am on the Autistic spectrum, I have trouble understanding my emotions, to the point where I am barely able to cry at her passing. But thanks to your story and the great music you put with it, I was able to at least shed some tears.
Please keep writing you glorious human being.
I just noticed that this story has For honor influences, also really fucking good story.
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Laughs in binary
Damn, I ran out of story to read.
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Ehm....well that comment was meant to be a bit on the humorous side, but i see that it failed spectacularly in that department
Sorry about that...
But regardless, that single chapter was as long as a lot of fics i've read. That there takes major skill and dedication to do.
For that accomplishment, i salute you Lord Staadnauthrusil
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huh and here i thought i was the only one to do this...
Finally, another amazing chapter filled with awesome fight scenes, brilliant songs and battles that combine the two. Here's to hoping that the author is proud of his work and gets enough well deserved rest.
Nah don't worry bout it, just means you got really into and invested in your writing. You should probably never try to fight being like that, as people just do better when they are invested and inspired on something. They think just a little harder. And fighting that will bring less inspiration and harm your writing. The average amount of things that can be held in though is 9. And that is when people are focusing on it. Realistically you have around 4, so if you have to think and plan everything you write you are guaranteed to miss stuff. Let your subconscious do its thing. Or you will have the greatest idea for your story but forget it because you are focusing on a certain part at the moment.
Holy potatoes... I... so much... the battles... the awsomeness... the feels... perfect... I can die happy now... And then come back to life to read more... more... always MORE
Also awsome ship!
Really glad Maleficus decided to come clean to Happy Meal, Grand Music, and Grand Feast. That was definitely the right move IMO. Still wish he didn't have to come up with fake personas every time he has to work with Celestia though. She's just being unreasonable and crazy! Maybe if he can find a way to get Luna to talk to her, she will finally see the light.
The final battle with Talos was awesome. Maleficus picked the perfect way to deal with that greedy, pony-eating beast.
aun no he leído pero se que sera genial