Some things do NOT match. Oil and Water, Oil and Fire, Alcohol and Bets, and Alcohol and Magic. Sad to say, was it the latter two combinations that occured one fateful night when a sad man goes to a bar for and meets a sad, and strange, woman.
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I've never sniped this story so early, can't wait to read this new chapter
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Thank you. Here's an update.
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King of music strikes again
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Indeed. He was quick on the act.
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I love the comparison.
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Interesting idea. But not one I am going to implement sadly enough as I already had some native panther griffins planned.
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Thank you for your kind word and for your honesty. I hope you enjoy this new chapter.
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I got to say that, that is very fitting. Almost disturbingly so.
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Thank you for your compliment. Here's a fresh chapter off the presses.
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Read the fine print.
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Thank you for your kind words and for the music suggestion. I got a feeling I might use that song in the future.
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Herez update.
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Eeeeeeeeh. It is getting removed, only Celestia speaks it currently and even then is her accent shifting constantly. Showing that she too is learning to speak differently. Though some old stubborn fools remain.
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...That sounded so epic. If only I could understand what it meant.
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Hahahahahaha oh gods I love that movie! Excellent reference!
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Well it takes a lot of effort. Editing. Unable to write shorter chapters because you keep expanding the sentences, character developments, heart songs and action scenes, and find yourself unwilling to cut them up. And then you cannot keep track of how the story progresses and spiral down and down until you finally strike gold and cut off the spiral and find yourself with a monster of a chapter.
Does that help?
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Thank you for the compliment. No need to worry, not everyone likes the same thing. I am just glad that people enjoy this story enough to give it a like.
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Well I am personally not really able to judge that. But for the most part have my readers given me positive comments. SO I'd liek to think I am improving, if slightly.
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Here you got some more. A lot of gruesome sights and a lot of weapons, some that backfire and some that don't. Enjoy.
An update! Time to reread everything!
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The Flesh of Maleficus Has a terrible curse behind it those who feed upon the flesh shall go into madness and be forced into endless torment Watching their flesh and muscle burn away and Scream in agony for the world to hear As the green Flames consumed what's left
When the new chapter is that awesome that fimfiction needs a whole day of downtime to comprehent how awesome it is :P
But a question about that liquid stuff...isn't it liquid magic? And can you do something with magic? I mean if a certain alicorn would drop in a tank of it...or would he simply die? I mean that would be boring but still.
Another great chapter I will wait for another one.
From the look of it, the griffin has done goof up.
Great work can't wait for more
great stories as always but seen I the disclaimer at the beginning we feel that copyright also hits here
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Start at 2:20
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The king of replying has returned to us. Hoa!
so is celestia unwitting going to save maleficus?
also the mad king is going to get madder from eating such unhealthy meat
Good chapter, and Happy birthday, but with all the time and the many words you had already in this chapter... Did you need to put a cliffhanger?
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Why do they all say (Pre-Beta)?
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You sniped the first comment as well, as you posted before I had even finished writing my response to the earlier comments. Nice sniping.
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A comment time to reread everything!
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Thank you for enjoying the story even with my lack of grammatical skills.
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Okay that sounds epic.
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It is the liquid, raw, essence of magic, which is essentially the life force of all sentient life on the planet. Some species have more magic then others. And this specific liquid is initially made by touching blood, the life fluid of a being, with crystallized thunder stone. I am not sure why it ended up being called thunder stone, I meant to call it lightning stone, but thunder stone just stuck. The thunder glass draws out the magic out of blood and converts it into liquid, raw, magic. This magical liquid is highly powerful, volatile and contaminating.
The liquid powers artifacts made out of thunder stone and even some other magical items, but it is highly flammable and explosive because of its raw unrefined essence. When this liquid touches living flesh, it will use, not only the blood, but the entire mass of the creature afflicted, to multiply the amount of liquid magic by a much larger magnitude then when blood is touched by thunder glass.
But the side effect of this is that the body becomes a pulsing mass of transparent tumor like growths which will erupt to spread the liquid magic even further.
If touching a non living or non sentient material, it will either mutate it, bring it to life, transform it, grant it a magical property, and so on. The effects this liquid magic has is highly unstable. But the effect this has on an alicorn is not yet discovered. Maleficus was afflicted, but only for a short amount of time. Hard to tell what could have occurred.
Thank you and the site for the compliment for my story. And I hope you enjoyed the answer. IT is in spoiler tags so those who do not want to know outside of the story can ignore it.
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Another great comment ,please keep it up.
And yeah, the griffins have gone goosed.
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Great post can't wait for another.
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Hehe yeah that was a fun scene.
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Ah. Thank you for the comment, and I apologies if it is so. Feels like I need to rewrite my disclaimers and alter the video links. Even though I have posted the disclaimers constantly, tried to use the original songs or cover songs, and altered the lyrics so they are not the original. (If I haven't done that all the time then I will be feeling stupid.)
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Two awesome videos. Loved the song and I have seen that fire/water spirit video before. And yeah, Maleficus' flesh restoration is like what happens to the robot skeleton. Only much more gory then that cartoon friendly regeneration. It is more like Wolverine's restoration after all his flesh is burned off leaving only his chrome dome skeleton.
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Hahahahaha! Yeah that's a classic movie! So what's it used to referencing in this chapter? Care to elaborate?
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The Kings and Queens of comments have returned! Hoa!
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Maybe. Possible. You will just have to wait and see.
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Sort of, I couldn't find a good note to finish so I wrote it like this.
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Thank you, I shall correct this.
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Because none of my chapters have been previewed and cleaned by a beta reader.
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Sorry if you feel like that. But then again, the violence doesn't build up to proper dark and gore levels until later.
Here is another post for you my thoughts on something that Maleficus did with that last bit of magic during his capture which i think he sent what was happening to him to celestia in the form of a dream so she wouldn't fall into the trap. As for the griffin king eating part of him couldn't that result in the meat being toxic do to metal poisoning cause if i remember correctly Maleficus has a metal skeleton and so does wolverine and wolverine typically has metal poisoning but regenerates faster than it can kill him also iron man gets it from one of the versions of his arc reactors. Anyway there's a post on my thoughts on things that may be or have happen
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It was a interesting take on things and I wonder what you could do with a lot of it, an approaching army and absolutly zero care for all forms of life exept your own.
Yessssssss another epic chapter .
Pls update soon , reading this kind
Of fantastic fanfic is the only thing
that keeping the boredom to minimal.
Pls stay safe from covid19.ππππππ
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As the Griffin King taunt and call him a monster for killing his soldiers in Equestria As he still impaled by The claws of Sorrow Maleficus replies back to the Griffin King At the same time the claws of Sorrow is being corrupted by the Flames of Torment. I am not a monster I am a genius and now I am angry and after I kill you I promise to melt you down for EXO degrees.
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Maleficus new project the dark Western dragon
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I love these chapters. I can just get sucked into the story and forget my worldly troubles. Thank you for that gift.
As always your chapters are a work of art and I hope Cravar dies horribly and painfully like skinned alive while being impaled by burning blades painfully.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yXmwpWuDmFM
hurk!! what dis?! i hef run out of chapterrrrrs!! need moar!
edit. I just realized i binged more then 500k words in 24 hours... I got sucked in to the story so violently that the sun has gone down and risen again... I think i might go to bed now...
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I almost cried reading this chapter. :( They better make sure that Griffin pays fo what he's done! He is sick beyond any imagination, he must die a horrible death.
My name is Anabel) This song fit everything so perfectly and really fit the mood. I dont say this much but I'm extremely excited about your next update and music choices.
I'd like to thank all of my readers and supporters on patreon thus far. I am not only responding on comments here. I am also giving you all an update. I have updated one of the scenes of Chapter Nineteen (Why did I write twenty??). I think you will find out which, but I felt that something was missing and I added a slight thing which I think just... adds that special something to the scene which I felt was missing. And I hope you will enjoy it just as much as I do.
On a short note. I am working on chapter twenty still. Though the process is a bit slow because of the heatwave hitting sweden right now. And my current economical issues. But it is still being worked on.
But without further delays. COMMENT RESPONSES!
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Who knows? It could be any of those. Or something else entirely.
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One word should fit this: DISASTER.
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Thank you and stay safe.
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Cool writing. Say is this entirely original or is some of it from something else? It just feels familiar.
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Yes. His memories are pretty messed up. For reasons I won't spoil. And by extension, so is much of his behaviour. He does not act logically or rationally from time to time as he is... for a lack of better words right now... brain damaged. For reasons I won't spoil.
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Many songs. But that one with the demon and the two children? Wow. That song is awesome. I might find it possible to add it to the story.
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Not sure why you are referencing to this spell. But the scene sure looks awesome. Is this how you think Maleficus glares at Craver as he leaves?
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Awesome pic.
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Thank you for the compliment. Hope you will enjoy the future chapters just as much, if not more.
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Thank you for the comment. And yeah, I got something special planned for our dear Griffin King.
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Eeeeeeeh. I am sad to say I cannot spot the reference. If it is a portal reference then I am sorry that I have not played the games.
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Good Gods. You read it all at once!? Wow... I thought only I did that. And I am the author so I keep skipping parts. I hope you will find the coming chapters just as enticing. Though do try to sleep rather then staying awake for en entire day and night.
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Thank you and so do I.
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Indeed. I am actually surprised it took so long for someone to comment on that.
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Oh yeah. I knew that before I even began to write this scene. Gave me shudders.
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Your non existing tears were still appreciated. Thank you for the compliment.
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Yeah. I am a bit disappointed with that scene myself to be honest. I rewrote it four times before I decided to just leave it be and hopefully nobody would complain too much about it. So far it hasn't been too much of an issue, if slightly annoying.
But man. Your comments are good. I am glad you seem to be enjoying the story thus far. And I hope you will be enjoying the rest you haven't commented on yet. I hope you will comment on other stuff in the chapters, perhaps on some of the scenes. Because I really like the cut of your gib. And I still cannot figure out what that means.
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I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter. And yeah. That song was what I based the entire siege upon. Just to build up to that moment. And I have now, with my latest updated. Added some more to the chapter. Which I hope people will enjoy. Still. Thank you once more for the comment. And indeed. King Craver has a special place prepared for his most 'glorious' self. Don't doubt on that.
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Your first question get there from Wild Wild West Dr. Loveless
Thank you for liking the songs
Yes to your second question
I see you like the Japanese dragon
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The song is awesome. I am running a P&P campain and thought of adapting it just for that. A sieged city of people defending against hordes of orcs. Would have been a good moment to have the various people mourn the loss.
Sadly I didn't get an instrumental for that song. Would be hearth clenching for sure. I went with a redone version of CamiCats Assembly song but meh.
Great work and I can't wait to see the sheer madness that will unfold in the next chapter!
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Thanks for still writing mlp fanfic after the show end πππππππ.
Your story is the very first story that could make me cry (and I have read a lot) with the death of golden cross.
Why canβt Maleficus turn back into his green burning skeletal curse form to escape the trap? I know it runs on magic, but it his natural state. It should cause the the blue fungus to explode within him.
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he isnt as experienced as he could be atm but that does seem like a thing he could do with some effort. i hope we get a new chapter soon
Thanks for all the chapters!
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My new look and new Theme
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been six months......we gonna get a chapter anytime soon?
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Talked to him via message, he is very sick