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Here's your new chapter. Sorry for the wait.

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Thank you for the compliment, here's your new chapter.

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Thank you and glad that you enjoy the story so far. Here is another chapter.

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Still not speaking Spanish.
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A good suggestion, I might do so in the future.

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...I am sorry to say I got no clue what you are talking about.

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Thank you for explaining it. Here's another chapter, a bit late but hopefully you will scale this one on the Thicc ranking as well.

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Oh I am a fan of the witcher series, I will be planning something like a bit of skulduggery and sneaky activities in the next couple of chapter. But I won't be giving out information about anything else. And the Crusade are a big No No on the sneaky part. Sorry. But here's a new chapter.
+1 Modifier to Fan Base accepted.

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Indeed.

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Nice try but there's a big difference between fudge filled muffins and pregnant mares. One is for eating the other one is for cuddling.

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Here.

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...That's a lot of hearts. Do you need a doctor?

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Thank you for your comment, and your view of Celestia is clear and to the point, hope it does not discolour your enjoyment of the next chapter.

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Thank you for the suggestion. And yeah there's gore in this story, and this new chapter, it is an obvious flaw that I describe a bit too much of what happens. But this new chapter is not as gory as the last one so hope you enjoy it.

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Thank you for the notification. I think I have corrected this spelling error, if not please tell me.

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Not sure if that fits with the story but it is still a good video.

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Yes and it is up and running.

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Yeah that is the bone and butter of this story. I enjoy how you mentioned it. Hope you enjoy this new chapter as well.
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It is a very touching comment is it not?

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I am here with more

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Here. Again.

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Huh? Were? I cannot seem to find that spot.

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Fixed, thank you for noticing that error.

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Thank you for the comment. Yeah the spelling and old speech are not my best result, the old English is just me messing around to make it sound oldish, it is not meant to be serious. And accidents are common am I afraid.

Glad you enjoyed my world building and story making, I hope you will be enjoying this new chapter just as much.

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Indeed. That's the joke.

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It is here?

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Indeed.

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Here you go.

YES!!!

This story is so underrated. If the fandom wasn’t dieing I bet that wouldn’t be the case...

So, instead of posting it during a school night where I'd stay up to read it, you instead posted while I was in school... Very crafty.

Alright let's see how fast I can read this. *cracks knuckles *

"I am whole when I am broken. I am broken when I am whole. The Poor have Me. The Rich want Me. The Dead know Me. The Blind sees Me. The Deaf hear Me.

Erupting into laughter the dragon nodded. "Hahahahaha excellent. Now. The final question."

I feel that there is something missing, namely the answer.

Then the old Priestess raised her head and spoke out another set of lines. "May their hearts be true, their blood strong, their fields green, and their minds clear. Bond together by love, by faith, by truth, by trust, and by faith."

Bit of a repetition here.

That was unexpected thank you

I wake up to a 58k chapter, well here goes the next hour and a half than

Bangcolt? Sound like Bangkok isn't it?

"Very well then. Meeting adjourned! All Hail the Society of Heraldry, Independence and Trade!"

I see what you did there!

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Indeed.

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The fandom shall never die! For Friendship Is Magic and will always remain so!

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Thank you, I felt like a change of phase.

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Let's see how fast I can respond to this comment! *Cracks Knuckles*

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Thank you for the notifications of those errors. They have been fixed.

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You're welcome.

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Only that much? wow you must be a quick reader.

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I wanted to use a horse city pun I had not heard before.

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Indeed. I always enjoy a good meeting ending. And the acronym was good too.

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I also noticed a few missing letters or mismashed words lik eso (like so). but don't worry, they can be overlooked without problem

"I am whole when I am broken. I am broken when I am whole. The Poor have Me. The Rich want Me. The Dead know Me. The Blind sees Me. The Deaf hear Me."

Did she answer or did he just ignore her, I find this confusing

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I have updated the text mentioned. It should be fine now.

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Oh, sorry I thought that was intentional

Then something weird happened, as Maleficus' claw was impaling the Cherub's head, began his shape to twitch and spasm, as if experiencing nerve twitches. And as it did so, began his muscles to expand, the spikes upon his back began to grow. His tail grew out as he grew in size, and suddenly, out from a geyser of green goo, erupted a pair of massive insectoid claw like limbs out from the rear part of his body where the tail had been expanding.

For a moment I was thinking this was the birth of the first changeling

onec agen a new chapter worth the wate … this is why I love this story good plot and long

In just happy it updated, even if it is a titanic chapter!

I'm kinda hoping Maleficus dragon form will be based off Acnologia, just imagining him, blowing away his enemies away is awesome enough, but doing it as the king of dragons (Or a look alike, I imagine the blue parts would be green, and he'd have a more pointed snout) will be like awesome sauce, on top of an epic sundae, sprinkled with Bad ass.

Quick question, since Maleficus defeated and (brutally) killed the false god, and parasitic angels, did that stop the miracles from occurring in Equestria, or were they done by actual god's and goddess, or by something else entirely.

And will the Sleipnir make an appearance, I feel like it would fit with the lore of the vikings, but I'm not sure how the ponies will react to it.

Love your Work.

I do not mean to be rude but this seems like a lot of info to throw at someone in one chapter.

Third Crusade black horses and black dragons and magma wolves the dragons have paralyzing breath.
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"Luna... Keep my mind safe. I am going to safe my parents." He said after a while his voice no longer rumbling and crackling like the combined voice of a tyrannosaurus and a sawmill. Luna, who had been watching the entire spectacle just gave him a reassuring smile and gave him a gutsy foreleg pump.

Save you put the word safe

And now we have to wait for the next chapter, fuck....

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No worries.

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Oh the Changelings are not in the story yet

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Thank you, I hope the wait was worth it.

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Neat video, clear message too.

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Thank you, hope you enjoy it more then the Titanic did.

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Not really my favourite dragon design. I am more of a Dragon Age or classic D&D kind of guy.

And no, the Angelic Parasites and the false God was NOT the source of any kind of miracle, think of them as beings not of heaven or hell, but not on par with outsiders like the Elder gods of the Chuthulu Mythos. Sort of like a race of extra dimensional soul leeches. They never utilized the power of 'God' for anything other then themselves.

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Yeah the Time Skip Chapters are a bit like that, sorry but I am not going to write more then one chapter for the in between moments when Maleficus is on the moon.

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...Eeeeeeh... Not going to say anything except that that idea sounds awesome.

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Fixed the error, thank you for notifying me.

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And now I will have to write another chapter.

That was an amazing update!!! You are a amazing writer

Goddess damn you Staadnauthrusil!! I was getting ready to go sleep after i spent the day playing with friends inApex Legends and by myself playing FFXV, but noo~ooo! Of course when i just check in to see what new has been posted in FimFiction, of bloody course there is a chapter from you! I've been waiting so many months! When i checked yesterday as is my routine, there was no new chapter.

But what great news! You posted the chapter literally during the next hour or so yesterday, WHEN I WAS ALREADY SLEEPING! CURSE YOU, YOU FOUL MONSTER! YOU SURPRISED ME AGAIN!!

AAAAAAAHHHH!!! I AM OVERFLOWING WITH EXCITEMENT AND UNADULTERED ZEAL AND FURY!!!
The music for the Fall of the False Heaven was not what i expected. I was listening to Intense Symphonic Metal on youtube.
Specifically this song:

And also this:

Considering that Maleficus was literally devouring the False Heavens host of parasites, the second song feels incredibly approriate.

I can't help but feel as if whatever S.H.I.T is planning, it either will backfire spectacularly or it will bring about a civil war... WHICH IS NOT WHAT IS NEEDED! THE FUCKS BEHIND S.H.I.T ARE SUCH MORONS!!!

Anyway.... to finish up this wee lil comment of mine, let me say just one simple thing....

You'd make an incredibly dangerous Demon Lord, Staadnauthrusil... You are such a dangerous person... You literally blindside me every time you post a new chapter...
WHAT IS YOUR DAMN SECRET?!? TEACH IT TO ME!

PS: You stole an hour of my sleep time... why?...

Thank you for the chapter!! I'm sorry to hear of your recent troubles and for your loss. I hope things improve for you quickly.

One misspell, the word before the Authors note.

Since I haven't said it I will now, this story is extremely well written and engaging, being easily one of the top five best written and interesting stories on this site. You are doing wonderfully. This chapter was epic and very impressive.

Stepping forward Maleficus stabbed the golden sword into the icy wall, just next to the angel's neck, even stabbing through the angel's floating halo in the process. He pressed his left foreleg up against the angel's throat and screamed out into utter fury into the angel's visor as his eyes burned with crimson fire. "WHERE ARE THEY!?"

The Dark Alicorn Rises coming to theaters near you in soon
P.S some errors i saw
<erupted Maleficus out fro mthe angel>
< he does not wish to cause unnecessary trouble for us all. Will he be watching>
/\ --its the "will he be watching" part dont you mean he will be watching?
Also but how are Järnberg and Póli ton Álogo
Humorous?

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Thank you, you are an amazing reader.

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Wow. Great comment, great reaction and great videos. Cool.

As for my secret? Meh. I am pretty sure you're just unlucky.

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Acronyms were not a thing when they founded the order. So yeah they never saw the flaw in their title.

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Thank you and I hope so to. You can aid me through patreon if you so wishes.

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I will check it out and correct it soon. Thank you for notifying.

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Heh thanks. and also thanks for notifying me about the spelling error.

And Järngård is not the humourous name it is the Spartan one. Which means City of Horses in ancient Greek, I used a translator for it so sorry if it is not correct.

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I think you're a mad god... kinda like Sheogorath, but not as obsessed with cheese. Or are you?...

Thy theme of madness, oh Greatest of Mad Gods!

So so fuking asum werth the wait!!!!

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The eye of faith is always watching.

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NateWantsToBattle - Phantom

More please man this is so interesting what gonna happen next Will be another crussade Will celestia turn to be daybreaker?

Great chapter! Hopefully you can have another one out soon! I'm looking forward towards it.

This chapter update has made me do 3 things.

1. Get hyped as all tartarus.

2. Read it with extreme gusto.

3. Re-read the entire story again, just for sheer awesomeness.

On a different note, I see that it's all "Pre-Beta" Do you have a plan to rework some of it / update it with correct grammar?

Battle of Gods

Goddess of the Sun

God of Torment

Light vs. Darkness Hope vs. Despair

The Alicorn of the Sun VS The Alicorn of Torment

Princess Celestia and Maleficus Victoria sings a strange duet for shits and giggles

Maleficus Victoria

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Dude, this chapter alone has 58k words. The longest chapter has 80k. It would be a miracle if Staadnauthursil got the next chapter out by the end of April.

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Holy shit that fight with the angels was fucking awesome. Oh what would be funny if celestia some how falls in love with him or caught him during her heat or both. That would be funny to see.

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Doing over 10k in itself is a noteworthy accomplishment. This story is one of my top 3 favourites on this site so can you blame me for looking forward towards more?

Maleficus Victoria Tome One: The Age of Crusades is 2 years old I know I am seven days off but happy related birthday.

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Imagining that now... Sunbutt would probably be pissed, but would still end up fucking him because... well, she's in heat. Mordane would be confused on why she would want to fuck him, because humans don't have heat, we have menstruation; plus Sunbutt has vowed revenge or whatever at every blood moon (i think) for her sister, blaming him for Moony happening. Personally, I think the both need a good fucking but ok then.

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Yeah but would she be blinded in her heat? I think it would be a yes but that just me tho.

Why did you wrote that part about "High Haven" ?
I don't get it. What porpose in this story does it have? Its a bit "deus-ex machina" to me.
You could remove that entire part with his parents just disappearing and him waking up and the story wouldn't lose anything exsept fiew thousand words.
Normally you give hints that events you are following are important in the future like the dragon hunert mare. But here that entire "High Haven" thing was unnesery graphomania.
Not that im complaing but you might have a problem m8.

I hope I haven't offended you or anything... I rather enjoy your work.

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Maybe? In some of the "heat" stories I've read it sounds almost like they burn almost unbearably to the point where they will chase after any stallions for quality time. At this point, only Staadnauthursil can put this to rest. *pointedly looks at Staady*