Some things do NOT match. Oil and Water, Oil and Fire, Alcohol and Bets, and Alcohol and Magic. Sad to say, was it the latter two combinations that occured one fateful night when a sad man goes to a bar for and meets a sad, and strange, woman.
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This is a cliff that measures its height in light years
DAMN that was just plain awesome. Every time I think this story can't get any better you suprise me.
I really wish I coud give this story a second like.
Can't wait for the next chapter to be released. Keep it up.
Wow. This chapter is well done. what will Grand Music and Happy Meal do with the information that Golden Cross is really Maleficus Victoria? I can't wait for the battle between him and Celestia.
God damn cliff hangers
Cliiiff Hanger, hanging from a cliff...
Also, Happy Meal is in charge of morale and is an older sister to some Apples. This is the connection between the Pies, which her mother makes the best, and the Apple clan. AND THEY DONT KNOW BECAUSE THE RECORD WAS SMUDGED!
... please stop capitalizing random things when you write.
NOOOOOOO!!!!
Not a cliffhanger!! Curse you Staadnauthrusil, you disturbingly glorious bastard!!
These chapters never fail to astonish me with the captivating descriptions and amazing battle scenes, complete with fitting music.
I don't know whether to kiss you for the wonderful chapter or hit you for the cliffhanger, probably both. Any way I am looking forward to more.
Oh and I have a question if you wouldn't mind. Are you going to do something for the thousand years Nightmare Moon would be stuck on the moon?
Needs to be edited
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Yeah, that is pretty much spot on. The Assassins were ignorant fanatical cannibals. And Maleficus' body is too dependent on magic to let him move around without constant support. One of the reasons why he did NOT fall down and collapsed to the ground during his first fight with Celestia is that his magic was supporting his body without him being aware of it.
Sort like an overprotective parent who nevers tells you how to get better and just constantly give you their secret support.
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Yeah the sad music always gets you.
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Thank you for your compliment.
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Yeah that answers pretty much how everything went from ponyville to warville in this Alternative Universe.
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...I am just going tell you this once.
NO.
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How about, you have a life and you're enjoying it?
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Yes I know, but I got a bit mixed up as I was writing, and momentarily forgot the difference during a few late evening writing marathons.
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Glad to hear you enjoyed it, hope you enjoy the next one just as much.
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I take it I should know what that image plus OIL means together. But I don't. Sorry if I disappoint you.
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Yeah, pretty much. At least we're not measuring it like Han Solo does.
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Thank you for your support and I am glad you are still enjoying my story.
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Yeah this chapter was pretty much a teaser before the Big Bad Boss Battle Brawl Event so yeah, it is going to be a rough ride.
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I do not mind. You did not enjoy my story then I apologies. English is not my native language nor is Archaic English something I have properly studied. Thus, I am just playing around to make the olden speech sound silly, I have accepted it does not fit the real deal but, I find it hilarious so I keep using it.
Hopefully you will give the story another chance later, but I am not going to press the issue and will just accept your criticism. Good luck with your studies of Olden English.
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Sorry, needed to be done or this chapter would not have been finished until June.
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Heh congratulations. You are the first to comment on that. I wanted to give the Apple Clan a proper backstory as of why it took so long for Ponyville to be founded while the Clan was so spread out, and I found the concept of a nomadic Clan made up of Ponies who acted like Johnny Appleseeds to be most fitting. Adding in Hearts & Hooves Day and a pretty single mother and you got a pretty decent idea of what I went with.
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If you mean the We parts and such, sorry but those parts will remain for a while until the story gets a bit further into the timeline. I am capitalizing some of the dialogues of those utilizing the Olden Pony Speech, as a way to mark how they do not use I, Me or other such words and just Us, We, Our and so on. Sorry if it frustrates, annoys or angers you but it will remain for a few more chapters. Sorry.
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...Meh. I don't believe a word, way too overdramatic.
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Agreed. There is no need to dislike someone just because they dislike a story, everyone have their own opinions and they have the right to have them. As long as they do not try to forcefully force them onto others, but that is not the matter of this comment so I highly doubt it matters at all.
Dude....THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!!! I can't wait for the next amazing chapter!
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Yeah, the spelling is not my best effort. Was rather hot lately and has been hard concentrating on the text. But I will try to rectify it swiftly. Thank you for notifying me.
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Sooo... Wait... Does that mean my chapters are always disappointing?
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I'd rather you do none of those things.
Considering Maleficus is forcefully summoned once every ten year for a month to the planet, I can say we have around 100 Crusades to go through. Although I do not intend on reaching even half of that number.
But there will be developments upon the nation of Equestria and Maleficus will not always be the focus of the story for every chapter. As you all might have guessed considering how I wrote the last Time Line chapter.
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Dude... THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLIMENT!!!! I can't wit for the next amazing comment!
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Wait... shit, I really didn't think that sentence out well, did I? Gotta edit it then
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Cool, can't wait to read it when you post it.
I like this story but the musical interludes really does kill the pacing of scenes. It’s the equivalent of watching a movie that starts and stops or a really laggy video game which has its FPS keep changing between a smooth 60 and 5.
Otherwise, this is interesting and I can’t wait to see the results of the revelation of who Maleficus actually was for a time.
After that battle Celestia is going to get the blame hammer. Such a powerful flame-strike would probably incinerate her downed forces, if they were not magically removed from the battlefield when they fell. But who knows that might be what is needed to snap her out of her madness.
And a possible return of the ancients to once again inhabit Equestria,, I like. Why do i get extreme warhammer nord felling.
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Please tell me how many days i need to wait for more?....
You ass! That cliffhanger was cruel! Why do you hurt us so?!
...
Amazing chapter tho. Really looking forward to the fallout now that they know who he is now.
Must I wait two months for more? >.<
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Thank you, but too be fair, there were points in my life where I would feel an intense hatred whenever things like "grammar" or "math" came up. Now, though, i buy textbooks on ancient unused English dialects because I want some free reading for when I'm traveling. Maybe it will happen to the downvoter, maybe they'll become my friend.
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Later in the story does the archaic speech ease up a little? If so I might read some more.
Alright, thing are finally starting to heat up again! Round 2, FIGH--(suddenly, cliffhanger)
Welp. This is going to be an Infinity War Part 2 kind of wait, isn't it?
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Kay, still thank you for the chapter
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Nope, actually gets kinda worse with EVERYPONY using "We" so instead of it being a ROYAL we, it's now the common we.
to be honest, I think he should rewrite the story and write normally except adding 'we's and 'us's for the royal sisters. Since the entire fiction is in the past, there's no real reason to continue using archaic englishI had one thought that has been going on through my head half way through this.
~Then the Winged Hussars Arrived, Coming down the Mountainside!~
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Hehehe it's fine.
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Can't wait to read the comments I will receive when I do post it.
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Sorry, I have had a lot of stress lately so I sort of rushed the big scale battle scenes. Could not flesh them out properly with having a lot on my mind.
Still glad that you enjoy the story, I hope to make a better line of battle scenes in the next chapter.
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Actually Celestia sent words for her armies to retreat from the battlefield, the Pegasus who had been incapacitated by Weather Shock, as it is going to be called, swiftly rushed off to help them get back to the War Camp before Celestia makes her Grand Entrance.
And I actually formed the Horses after the Elven Spears & Shield Soldiers during the Battle of the Five Armies in the third Hobbit Movie. With the thick iron plate armour of dwarves ,only with round spartan shields rather then the Dwarven shields.
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Glad to know you are looking forward to it.
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Well... at least a month I think. I do want to finish the next chapter before my Birthday, the Twelfth of June, so I will try to get it done before then. No promises however.
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Well because within some pain, you do not develop yourself as individuals and just end up as fragile little Stormtroopers.
Thanks for your compliment and I do hope you will enjoy the next chapter once it is completed.
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I hope to finished the next one within a month's time, but I do not intend to make promises I cannot keep so I won't do that. So I will try, but I will not promise anything.
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Nope. I meant Poleaxe, the Halberd bit was a mix up from my part.
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Yeah, cliffhangers are like that. But they do serve a purpose. To entice the readers.
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No. Unless you intend to cause a Civil War before it is posted.
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I was more inspired by the Rohirrim's charge down towards the Uruk Army during the final battle of helm's deep, but that fits just as well.
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only a month!?
You beautiful, glorious man/woman. if i could, i would kiss you.
A month is blissfully short but also agonizingly slow enough where my interest still is with the fic and i will sing you praises for the weeks i wait for the new chapter. After the new chapter, the process will be rinse and repeat.
If it gets me easy 20k+ long chapters, i would wait for double the time as the quality of your work is like a dream one wishes to last forever.
So, in a months time i will be looking forward for more and say happy birthday to one of my favorite writers in the history of ever
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Just don't overuse them. I've seen plenty of authors falling into the trap of "Hey, look at my shiny new toy!" before suddenly pasting cliffhangers all over the place like a tweenage girl with a brand new bedazzler she got for her birthday. (suddenly shivers uncontrollably before blankly staring off into space) ...Rhinestones everywhere...
...Anyways, the point I was trying to make is that cliffhangers work best when used sparingly, otherwise their effects go from "enticing" to "grating" pretty damn quick.
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Ok!
I absolutely love this story, but why did ya have to make it a cliffhanger! Keep up the amazing work!
I get butterflies in my stomach everytime I see there's an update.
Men dont cry people say that means I'm not a man right now ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
You know I'm kind of surprised Maleficus hasn't tried to get Faust back from that other dimension yet. Maybe if he brings her back she can make Celestia see reason.
Anyway, glad he came clean about him being Golden Cross. I don't think they'll tell anyone else, but I would love to see the look on Celestia's face if she found out.
Really hate how you've got the YouTube videos linked mid chapter...
Now, I'm fine with one or two per chapter, but when there's a new video every 5 paragraphs it gets to be a little bit annoying.
Still love the story itself though.
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Personally, I think it'd be better if they were actually linked instead of embedded into the page itself. When they're embedded you need to scroll back up to it in order to pause/stop the music at the right moment, and the only way to play them in a new tab is to first open it in this tab, whereas you could simply right-click an ordinary link for the same effect.
Though I'll admit it's different for things like sound effects, such as the Witch King's screech from chapter six. Those are less something to be listened to while reading, and more something to be watched in their entirety before moving on with the text.
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He cant with the banishment.
Wouldn't it be Awesome if he did something "MYTHICAL" every time he shows up?
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You're my hero.
Cliff hanger and a several month wait..
The morning sun upon the east coast and the peaceful quiet atmosphere of the main road leading south from the mountain ass in the north,
What a beautiful ass
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Damn love the Story so far. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
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I rather like them as they are for one simple reason. You ever read this story on a phone? If you open the video in a new tab and try to go back to the story the video automatically pauses, so for links I'd have to use a computer to listen and read at the same time.
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I've never understood that, why would you want to read fanfiction on a phone? Tiny screen, excessive data charges, people bothering you when you're trying to immerse yourself in what you're reading, blegh.
When it comes to reading fics, I'll stick to my desktop thank you very much.
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Well, I don't know about you, but I rather like lying on top of my bed while reading. To read on something else would require me to either have a laptop on my lap, or get up to go on the desktop. Also, it's good for when I feel like staying up until 4am while discreetly reading.