Some things do NOT match. Oil and Water, Oil and Fire, Alcohol and Bets, and Alcohol and Magic. Sad to say, was it the latter two combinations that occured one fateful night when a sad man goes to a bar for and meets a sad, and strange, woman.
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Yay for more chapters
Here's the new chapter. Enjoy.
Update: Oooh and apparently I broke the 500k record on the Word Counter. Yay!
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Okay, it fits.
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Who knows. Ponies can be more stubborn about changing their believes then most would assume.
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And I enjoy honest and non hateful comments. Which yours are. I am actually better off people giving me criticism then flowery flattery since I do know that criticism is its own form of flattery as it involves people who actually wants me to improve. Even if some of them are not all that effective, or polite, at doing it, do I still accept them as comments.
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I am sorry about the long waiting period. My life... hasn't been the brightest for the last couple of months.
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Here's more. Enjoy.
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Wow... Are you trying to become my personal DJ or soundtrack maker?
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No worries. Here's another chapter. Enjoy.
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Here's another update.
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I intend to.
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Glad you enjoyed it. Sorry for the delay and here's another chapter.
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Well here you go. Chase that cliff! It's flying!
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Here it is.
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Sounds legit says the ignorant masses.
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Update. Not as fast as I think you hoped. But here.
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Here is another one.
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Life. Sad life.
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I await more comments. Tis very good.
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Wellllll... in a manner of speaking?
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...Am I actually going to have to ask if you have read Maleficus' interaction with the ponies?
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*Whistles innocently while making notes*
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Still not understanding a word but hope you enjoy this new chapter.
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Yeah just like that. Only... they get hold of more sugar and more candy after ingesting the first dosage.
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Love comment.
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Thank you. Sometimes I think I am overdoing things but people seem to love these overly large chapters of mine for some reason.
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...Pinkie pie does not have the ability to force me to relinquish my cake. If I am going to offer cake to someone, it will be by free will, not force. And she respects this, and the fact that I am able to ban her from my home if I so wish.
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Eeeh he was kind of depending on the whole, shadow shifting thing. To not be able to be afflicted by magic through a medium. You have to give him credit as he wasn't all aware about the rules of abilities of magic. No even now. And so he let her rant.
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I accept all suggestions and opinions. Structured and logical criticism is welcome. and I admit these are faults of his. And I do intend on things having a slight change from the train track. But I am not giving more information then that.
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Wow... Well I will try to add the proper files to the story. Not making any promises, as I am a bit busy and loses a lot of notes as I work on stuff IRL. But thanks for the music and I hope to get things fixed in the future. Thank you.
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Well here you go.
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It's fine no need to get worked up about other's posts. I accept all opinions and comments. Well as long as they are not hateful, spam or criminal, I need to have SOME standards. But seriously though, thank you for your comment and I hope you will enjoy the future chapters I have in plan.
*sees new chapter*
Well then... guess i'm not getting any sleep tgis night X3
I like how on my phone I have the song when the hammer falls
Sorry for your loss
Amazing chapter! Thank you! But....
You did not boop the snoot. I iz disappoint.
You, dear sir, need a hug and a hot mug of coco!
Pinkie! Do your thing!
Keep going strong man, I'm sure she'd be proud of how you've weaved such a breathtaking tale.
I’m so happy for a update
I hate how each chapter could be a small book.
Wew. Finally managed to slog through this. Song choices appropriate as always; how long does it take to find those songs? Or do you craft scenes around particular songs?
If Smeagol were me, ”The precious came back.”
do not let go! You're a happyness maker, I'm a soldier and I have a week of shit, but your chapter just came back to me to continue, your great writer, pity continues to write works of art
Hope google translate did is job well :)
Pony WW1?
Oh boy, the implications at him being much older than he thought... Also, when is he getting a talking timberwolf for a pet so he can hunt down ghosts?
Just noticed.....you had a patreon man. Got myself in there. *Also glad to see an update.
Good to have you back amazing chapter as always and totally joining that patreon
I am happy to see you back my friend, and l am so very sorry to hear of your loss
I'm so sorry about your mum, I can't even imagine how hard these last few months have been. I hope things improve soon for you.
Thank you for the exciting update!
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Yay for more comments.
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Go to sleep man and take your time.
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It is a great song.
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Thank you.
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This is one awesome song, I REALLY like it.
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No. It is too soon. The boop must be... savored.
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*Is suddenly warped in a hug with a hot mug of coco in his claw* Mmmm... there's marshmallows...
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Actually mom wasn't one for violent stories but she did like it that people were reading my stories.
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I am so happy for comment.
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*Writes something*
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I usually craft the scenes around the songs. As I do not want the scenes to seem uncoordinated with the lyrics.
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If Smaug was me, 'Welcome to my lair, Comment Writer!'
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Thank you for the comment. Although Google translate didn't do its job.
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemaybe?
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...Okay. *Makes a note*
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Thank you. Happy for your patreonage.
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Thank you for your great comment and glad for your patreonage.
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Thank you for your words. Glad to see your comments.
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Thank you for your kind words. I hope you will keep enjoying the story.
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While reading the latest chapter....
I uhm... I fell asleep after reading like a fifth of it X3
9956419 I only live to satisfy your bloodlust starter.
...Is it weird that I now want every griffin on the planet to die a horrible and gruesome death?
Also, when "King" Craver finally falls, I'm expecting a rendition of this:
(Unless you're saving it for something better.)
Go to 4:58 to this part of the second video.
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Small thing that bugs me, while this is all fiction I don't think Griffins would lay eggs. After all the reproductive half is mammalian.
Still good chapter keep it up.
My heart goes out to ya'. Because I know, It hurts and it's gonna hurt bad for a long time. I've lost a couple of close family members last and this year. I'm still dealing with it to. But hold your head high and stand strong, an' let them feel pride in whatever you do. Because you may not think it, but you've made me smile and happy. And for me It means something, So thank you for those times.
I had my suspicions when I read his first name but this moment made me happy. It's reference to who I consider one of the greatest and most morally aligned hero of the Imperium despite what he thinks of himself is beatiful.
As always a great chapter! Though I am very sorry for your loss. Just remember that the end of one thing is only the start of something more. You will meet again with your parents again someday as will we all.
Update soon my friend!
he needs to find a way to extend his time, maybe cheat the elements of harmony so that they measure time badly?
And now I wait for another year for a chapter bigger than most stories on this site lol
Hello Staadnauthursil
First off I wish to offer my condolences for your loss and I hope many people were around to talk and find comfort in like a certain loveable pink ball of fun and sugar.
Secondly...*ahem* Once again you dear sir have knocked me off my feet with your amazing chapters and I simply just cannot wait for more despite how grim some of the scenes are especially that King Craver honestly makes me sad I didn't think up such a villen for my own story.
Finally I have a very intriguing sense of justice Maleficus or Celestia can use if/when they bring down King Craver have the bastard cooked and served as his most favorite dish while keeping him alive before feeding him to a creature that would be able to swallow him in one gulp and then let the stomach acids finish him off.
Why is that villains always forget that Celestia is the one in charge of the sun and while ponies could replace her, without enough ponies the Day or the Night could last forever...
Also, I guess 30 days is too little to plan a revolution so that they take the Griffon King.
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Son of the Alicorn of Torment the Griffin killer names stain dragon lord theme songs.
HELL OF A FIGHT THEME
I have started a Voting Pool for the names of the forces which will be fighting soon.
Here's the Blogpost containing it: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/881179/vote-for-your-favourite-army-name
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So what did you think of the chapter?
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Good songs, not sure if I will use the DBZ or Hero Academy ones though not really sure if they fit.
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Dude! This song is awesome!
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Good song. Might use it, not sure.
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Nope.
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Great visual aids and songs in both those. Really enjoyed them.
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Well I am making it eggs since it would make it even more disgusting for their ruler to be eating not only griffin chicks but griffin eggs as well. I really wanted to clarify just how messed up this bird cat is.
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Thank you for your words and I am glad that you are enjoying my story so far.
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Did you notice the other great, but underappreciated, hero I added in there?
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Thank you for the comment. Your words are very much appreciated.
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*Makes a note on a notepad* Thanks for the suggestion and for writing it in english. Sorry if I sound stupid but I truly have had no idea what you have written in most of your earlier comments, as I only know English, Swedish, and some minor sentences in other languages.
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Well... maybe not.
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Thank you for the comment. Those suggestions sounds interesting. But I am sad to say that I already have a rather ironic fate for our dear king planned. And I hope to pull off the carpet beneath everybody when it is revealed.
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Well to be fair the griffins are ignorant or in denial about that particular detail. And yeah 30 days is a bit short of time. But it I also the fact that the Griffins already had ships and troop ready for a second wave of raiding. Only kept at bay at the failed result of the first wave causing them to delay departure, giving the ponies and horses enough time to build up their own fores to counter strike the griffins with an invasion of their own.
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Glorious
Hey since everyone is sharing a song might I suggest this one.
You gotta give props to Cursed Blessing for his improv acting skills.
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Well what did you write?
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RLjMkdBsvB8
King of the Griffin theme
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The Alicorn of Torment theme
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Princess Celestia theme
Go to 1:13 for this
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