Some things do NOT match. Oil and Water, Oil and Fire, Alcohol and Bets, and Alcohol and Magic. Sad to say, was it the latter two combinations that occured one fateful night when a sad man goes to a bar for and meets a sad, and strange, woman.
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Ah, fuck you man!! It's 3 AM and i was about to go to sleep, but then you had to post a new chapter! Why are you so good with your timing XD
Tell me your secrets!!!!
Damn....
Way to kill me with feels....
I can't handle all of these feels!!
This is a good story. When are the changelings going to be a thing? If and when they become relevant to the story, are you planning on having only one hive or multiple hives? If you choose to use multiple hives then you are welcomed to use my Shadow Hive Kingdom.
So, Equestria is becoming more militaristic? But Celestia is ignoring needs of other towns... will this cause rebellions to form, I wonder?
Whoa what a chapter.
😠my emotions my heart😫
I love how long you make your chapters! The story is awesome, keep up the good work
Damn it! Another chapter thats left me teary-eyed.
As usual worth the wait. You really know how to make someone cry their eyes out. The quality is without question perhaps the best their is to offer. And an ending to a chapter that leaves you satisfied and leaves you wanting more. And again I feel like reading it from the beginning all over again. Also I didn't expect to see Mal to break like that... it's a bit sad.
Well that was an enjoyable chapter although there were several spelling mistakes.
Don't expect me to point them out though I'm far too lazy and this story is far too big.
I can't wait to see more from this this is honestly one of my favorite stories on this site
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Well... no spoilers. I like your idea. but I won't say anything else.
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Hahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahaaa... *coughs into his claw* ahem. Once again. No spoilers.
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No secret, just your timing that sucks. Feel the feels man.
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I would have to know about your Shadow Hive Kingdom first, but do not worry. The Changelings will be part of the story... only... Not for a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time.
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Yeah for some reason, despite me clearly writing a disclaimer at the start of my chapter, the videos gets deleted. I am not sure if it is Youtube or the Makers, I cannot tell, but I do hope it doesn't keep happening because I love these videos and I am not adding them here for some money gambit, I just find them fitting for my story. It's not like I claim to own them.
And yeah, Celestia's warmongering attitude will make some changes to the progress of the nation. And no, I wont tell you how.
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Thank you for this compliment.
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Your emojiis, forgot to mention those.
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Thank you. For some reason I cannot seem to limit myself lower then 20k chapters recently. Hopefully I will be able to keep it up.
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Here have a tissue.
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I appreciate your thoughts. It is fun to hear how much others enjoy my story. And yeah, this chapter was a mixture of time skip montages and the mental break down of a former human. There will be feelings in it.
Not to mention I had to actually break apart the rambling of Maleficus with sub and sup bbcodes so I would stop crying every time I started working on the scene between him and Luna.
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Yeah spelling errors are not going to stop. I will try to correct some that I find as i reread the chapters. But they are not always clear to the eye.
I am glad you enjoy my story and hope you will enjoy my future chapters just as much.
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Ok, then I will send you a pm about my hive tonight.
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Damn.
Just...
Damn.
You know, it occurred to me that Malificus had no room to be annoyed at how the ponies pulled Stone from the ground and simply left the holes underground when he did the same when pulling iron from that mountain which he noted would most likely cause it's collapse.
You know what? I think this is my favorite story, keep up the great work.
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I would love to read it.
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I prefer fruit juice myself, not as strong to the stomach.
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Hah I was wondering when someone would notice that pun.
All Royal Boners are a danger if not used with proper care and precaution.
And no, Maleficus did not JUST pull out iron from the mountain, he replaced it with Moon Sand, it was the only thing he could figure out to do without causing the mountain to collapse. So yeah, he filled a whole mountain with Moon Sand and transported the Iron to the Moon. NOT leaving a massive hollow space beneath the earth.
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Thanks
Just
Thanks
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I am glad you enjoy my work thus far. Currently working a bit on chapter Twelve, up to around 1k words.
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Fruit juice huh? I'm a fan of cranberry juice oddly enough. There's something about the bitterness i like...
Decided to read instead of wait for more chapter, and I love it, but I have some doubts...
one question that I don't understand of the assasins, how they expect the sun and moon to move if they kill Celestia?
And how could the muscles be "weak" after the many days of training that he had before being sended to Equestria?
[a living goat, which had promptly died.] <--- And so, this is the begining of Grogar
Loved the filly Luna parts.
Thanks for another great chapter!
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The assasins:
They came from another world, brought by Discord. They likely had no clue Celestia moved the sun.
Muscles:
His magic was acting as a sort-of "crutch" for his muscles. The magic was actually what held him up, however now he has decided to turn off that magic to allow his muscles to not need the crutch of magic. However, his bones are made out of that metal stuff and he likely literally weighs tons. Because of this, his muscles are not able to support him unless he trains more
this story was amazing so far. I noticed it a few times in the updated tab and popular tab, but didn't think much about it. Finally decided to check it out and I'm really glad that I've read this story now. It's definitely going on my tracking list.
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does he become chummy with everyone the moment he meets any of the characters from the show? that's all I need to know, so long as they approach that part realistically i'll be fine
Amazing story so far, i actually ended up binge reading the whole thing in maybe.....14 hours...lol i have no life. keep up the great work
Hey. Justread the entire story in one sitting. Glad to say that it's pretty great, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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es bueno saber que no va a relatar cada pequeño detalle
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He has to be thankful he haven't used that other four-lettered obscene exclamation. Would be a lot more awkward.
Hmm, some interesting forshadowing in his babbling I see on this reread.