Some things do NOT match. Oil and Water, Oil and Fire, Alcohol and Bets, and Alcohol and Magic. Sad to say, was it the latter two combinations that occured one fateful night when a sad man goes to a bar for and meets a sad, and strange, woman.
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I simply adore stories with good storylines AND good implementation of songs. It's pleasant to know that FFDP found some use here - it's a good band.
Also here is the hope that Golden Cross will grow to a legend status with his periodic appearances through equestrian history. I'd like to see that.
Btw, ending promises us that next chapter will be also action packed, correct?
Wow bit of a dark chapter there, I can see some of the saved travelers especially happy meal looking up to 'Golden Cross' and asking to be trained as more law bringers.
Also If he meets Celestia I wonder if she will notice that he talks exactly like her arch nemesis and realize there is a connection especially if he sticks around for what sounds like a huge battle or siege.
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Glad to hear your approval.
The Lawbringer Golden Cross' history in Equestria will be grand, but not in the way you think.
And yeah, oh yeah, there is going to be violence on a grand scale.
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Yeah, was kind of the point. The dark points were meant to be exposed and expressed in this chapter.
Oh there will be an influence upon the ponies by Golden Cross. No doubt about it.
Celestia's reaction to Golden Cross manner of speech is not going to be much of a point, there are so many different accents and speech patterns among the newly arriving ponies that she will not notice.
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And the whole "slaughtering an entire group of deserters-turned-bandits singlehandedly" thing? If a mysterious stallion wielding that kind of power shows up out of nowhere, so soon after their own battle, it's gonna set off some red flags. Even if she doesn't confront him herself, she'll undoubtedly try and keep tabs on him.
And even if she does give "Golden Cross" the benefit of the doubt, once Maleficus' month is over she'll have to make the connection. Both of them vanishing off the face of the planet on the same day in addition to all of the other signs? She'd have to be brain-dead not to see it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sd5ZLJWQmss
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I never said she would NOT notice him, but his speech pattern is not what she will take note of. Since like you said, she will be more focused on the whole massacred the villains thing, but Golden Cross will have plenty to rebuke with so no worries.
And as for how Maleficus intends to do things before the end of the month? Well, that's a secret.
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Hehehe fitting final scene music if not for the whole USA and truck bits.
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Whatever floats your comment.
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You got it straight on the nail there.
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Indeed and that's why things turns out so bad in future chapters, the consequences keeps on tolling.
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Eeeeeeyup.
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One word: Thanks.
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Indeed, hope you will enjoy the following chapters just as much.
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When he sung the lyrics in his head, is it bad that I heard the song?
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Nope, that was what I was trying for actually, I wanted the song to get through when he was cleaning up even if I did not write the entire lyrics of the song. It was to put a feeling to the mood he was in.
At least I hope you mean the part were he was washing, for he was singing OUT LOUD during the battle.
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Yeah, there will be more Luna interactions later.
More please
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I will try to have the next chapter up sooner. No promises however.
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Thank you.
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Eh, you will find out that there is a lot of people who will do that.
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Well... just keep reading and you will find out for yourself.
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Well, surprise I guess?
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Not just that, there is something else, something that will be discovered upon a later date. There is actually a few clues in some of the chapters.
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Hope there is more soon.
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Working on it, I will most likely not be done until January.
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It's cool I really love the story. so I'll other stories till the next chapter out.
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Glad to hear, hopefully I will be able to finish it quickly.
Dead link on the music, alternative here:
Should the non-con tag be added?
Yes I know I am late to the story and no I did not read all the comments. I just have to be a little nitpicky right here, you know poleaxe and a halberd are two different weapons right.
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He might've meant "PoleARM" which is a type of weapon. Which Halberds are a part of. You can see why the two would be confusing.
Okay... damnit... shit... fucking hell... this chapter was good enough (minus the absolute tons of errors) to alleviate the downvote.
Ah, gotta love enemies having bad intel walking face first into a glassing beam. Gonna be real pretty when they retreat right into a Lawbringer and get their heads lobbed off. Fun times being a bastard 'bout to get Murphy-ed.