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Everything was fine and dandy,until Celestia lost it. She took ponies from all over Equestria and pit them against each other to the death. Three ending will be available for you to choose. The inspiration for this story came from the backstory of Dasdeer's song, BPFF'S.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 17 )

Nice idea, I'll stick around and try and see what you come up with.

Interesting, almost reminds me of a familiar story to this which is all the Mane 6 who had to fight to the death. Nice idea btw, I'll have an eye on this story.

I'll watch the story and see how it goes. Personally, I would KILL Princess Celestia, Luna, and even the guards if I was pushed into something that would harm me and my friends, competition or not.

877171 Well, I would too. I wouldn't kill Luna though because (spoiler) in the second ending, she is going to help the remaining ponies overthrow Celestia. Besides, Luna isn't doing this for fun. She was forced by Celestia.

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I could never kill Luna, no matter what she did because... reasons. Anyway, I liked this newest chapter, you managed to get each of the characters personae right and each match ended the way I expected them to. I suppose your building up to have a mane 6 fight each other. Also, I'm glad you put that extra ending in for those who don't want some dark story like this. I look forward to more!

I'm still betting on Vinyl winning.

These two chapters that I've posted I had done for some time. Since I haven't done anything recently with uploads, I thought you guys would like some more chapters. Enjoy!

Nice, this wouldn't normally be my sort of thing, but yeah. Keep up the good work!

Yes, please let vinyl win

I just know vinyl is going to win.

I love a good grimdark before I open up google docs to write.

This was good, but I think it jumped around between the four separate fights a little to much. Maybe if you did one fight at a time it would be more cohesive. Either way, I loved it! Keep it up!

2448116 Yes. This is equine nature. What first seems barbaric, will soon devour their sense of right and wrong, leaving them to become monsters wanting to see their favorite reach the top, and the others to die in horrible, painful ways. Don't fight it, you will learn to love it.

What do you mean, this game isn't fun, Pinkie?
Great writing, by the way!

We all know that since Twilight is the main character, according to stereotypes, she will win.

However, because this is a Dark story, maybe Vinyl will win...

Everyone loves random death! Like in one sentence during the Pinkie match it goes:

What was wrong with her.

Instead of the much more emotional:

What was WRONG with her???

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