(I am overburdening myself) One of my friends got an idea for a new villain for My Little Pony. This is my interpretation of what could happen if he would become a true villain in Equestria. Basically, the plot line is a new villain arrives through the dreams of ponies. After Twilight attempts to use a spell to dispel the nightmares plaguing her mind, she accidentally set's free an evil overlord. (Note: This doesn't exist in the Twilicorn universe)
And Twilight doomed them all..... again
Would somebody care to explain to me why this story only has two likes? THIS STORY NEEDS MORE LOVE GODDAMNIT!
Anyway, really well done and I can't wait for more.
This was a little too short to form a proper opinion on, but it's still a nice story concept. Can't wait for more!
Damn, I forgot to do Fluttershy. Fixing now.
Nice chapter; I really like where this story is going. One complaint:
Should probably be:
Other than that, it's really good. I'm glad that you're updating so quickly.
2344281 Thanks for the feedback, Fluttershywriter. Your support really helps. I'm updating this fast because I'm quite interested in it.
Interesting.
Continue.
2447689 Will do.
Nice chapter! Can't wait for more
2456942 You won't have to wait.
I don't know how to describe this chapter, but it was good.
Nice, I think you really got Rainbow's character down.
Yay!! Luna appearance!
2526214 Totes.
For those of you who don't know, The Dream King was edited a bit to fit in with the story line.
I honestly don't understand why this story doesn't get more love. This is an amazing villain that you've created, and the character interactions are incredibly well-done. Nice chapter, as always.
2566079 I didn't create the basic concept of The Dream King. My personal friend, BrightOnion, did. I just developed him into what he is.
Nice ending to this chapter.
Nice story a lot different from the orginal with the Twilicorn, but still good.
Am sem-glad you got the villian from me.
Nice, can't wait for the next chapter!
Is it me or from the description, does the villain sound like Freddy Kruger
2674203 Wouldn't know. I've never watched any of his movies.
Excellent ending chapter!! I loved this story so much.
I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more views.