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(I am overburdening myself) One of my friends got an idea for a new villain for My Little Pony. This is my interpretation of what could happen if he would become a true villain in Equestria. Basically, the plot line is a new villain arrives through the dreams of ponies. After Twilight attempts to use a spell to dispel the nightmares plaguing her mind, she accidentally set's free an evil overlord. (Note: This doesn't exist in the Twilicorn universe)

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Comments ( 24 )

And Twilight doomed them all..... again

Would somebody care to explain to me why this story only has two likes? THIS STORY NEEDS MORE LOVE GODDAMNIT! :flutterrage:
Anyway, really well done and I can't wait for more.

This was a little too short to form a proper opinion on, but it's still a nice story concept. Can't wait for more! :heart:

Damn, I forgot to do Fluttershy. Fixing now.

Nice chapter; I really like where this story is going. One complaint:

She swayed slightly, feeling dizzy. Please let this be the end of the interview.

Should probably be:

She swayed slightly, feeling dizzy. Please let this be the end of the interview.

Other than that, it's really good. I'm glad that you're updating so quickly. :heart:

2344281 Thanks for the feedback, Fluttershywriter. Your support really helps. I'm updating this fast because I'm quite interested in it.

Interesting.
Continue.

Nice chapter! :heart: Can't wait for more

I don't know how to describe this chapter, but it was good.

Nice, I think you really got Rainbow's character down. :rainbowkiss:

For those of you who don't know, The Dream King was edited a bit to fit in with the story line.

I honestly don't understand why this story doesn't get more love. This is an amazing villain that you've created, and the character interactions are incredibly well-done. Nice chapter, as always.

2566079 I didn't create the basic concept of The Dream King. My personal friend, BrightOnion, did. I just developed him into what he is.

Nice story a lot different from the orginal with the Twilicorn, but still good.
Am sem-glad you got the villian from me.

Nice, can't wait for the next chapter!:twilightsmile:

Is it me or from the description, does the villain sound like Freddy Kruger

2674203 Wouldn't know. I've never watched any of his movies.

Excellent ending chapter!! :pinkiehappy: I loved this story so much.

I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more views.

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