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Septia


This page is for the lewd and depraved writing concocted by Septia. Naturally, only the pony related gets posted here. For the rest of my work, head to my Eka's or FurAffinity.

Sequels2

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Uh huh.

Septia #2 · Mar 4th, 2017 · · 1 ·

7996186 Mmmhmm.

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*Chuckles.*

The hell is this site anymore.:rainbowderp:

Great work I think. As long as you're happy.:twilightsheepish:

Was doing pretty good, right up until the scat portion. Definitely could have done without that, but the actual vore was nicely detailed.

Fetishes? In my Fimfiction?

This is one of my favorite stories. I cumed a lot to the one maid who wanted to back out, that was so erotic I am in awe. I thought that in the end the mare that was inside the toilet bowl was going to be flushed along with it, I thought that was why she shuddered when cadence whispered to her. That would be so erotic to me, but anyway very good story.

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The commissioner was happy, so I was as well, thank you~.

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The description contains a guide for kinks, showing in what segment some kinks begin. If you don't wish to see certain content then this guide can be of great help. Thank you~.

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I am very glad to hear it~.

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"It is likelier than you might think."

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There was nothing in the story suggesting that the mare in the toiletbowl got out when it was flushed.
Twilight certainly forgot all about her.

8003608 For future reference, it might be better to divide these segments up into chapters so that readers can more easily navigate to their preferred parts.

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The story is set up using a number system, where the description details what kinks come after each numbered break for easier navigation.

However, It is set up like this because it was the best way to organize and ease navigation on most other websites. Here on FimFiction, the chapter system could definitely be utilized. It may cause some segments, or chapters, to be quite short and could potentially break up the flow of the story quite drastically. I am willing to take measures for the benefit of many readers, but I do not wish for said measures to impede reading.

Just to say that I have taken measures for easier navigation and warnings, but fim's new options have given me something to consider. Thank you for the recommendation.

8003619 Sorry lol, the last few paragraphs confused me somewhat.

The purple mare stumbled off the seat, her tongue still hanging heavy. ”Oooh.. Gosh. Can't say I, imagined it to be so… potent.” -Brppruulth-. She barely noticed that a maid had started tending to her messy pucker, wiping up traces of molten chocolate with her tongue.

I thought you meant here that Twilight "barely noticed that a maid" had climbed out of the toilet and was licking her (she's a bit out of it). I read it over a couple of times until I was 90% sure you meant to spare her and commented. Also, it's the most nonsensical cause for a maid to die for compared to the other stuff in the story, but I wasn't going to question it for a second because it felt so right.

8003665 Happy to hear. Just trying to help. Although, with fatal vore involved, I doubt it would do much to help in the ratings. That's just the attitude of this site.

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Oh I wouldn't do it to help with ratings. It is hard to care much about many people dislike a story, because the content is not something they enjoy.

But if it would a wider range of people enjoy the story more, it is definitely something I will consider.

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She is a bit out of it at that point, yes.
Although as it says there it never mentions that the maid in the bowl got out. In fact, very little else is said about her~.

8004496 Very good *nods nods :yay:

(Vraddock here, wearing a fake moustache) Just wanted to say I love this story! Willing, casual fatal vore with maid outfits is exactly my jam, heh! Very nicely done with the willingness by the way, it's done so that it can be interpreted diner way and works for fans of either willing or non-smoking. This got added to essentially three favourites bookshelves of mine, and I came to it as well. So yeah! Very good story!

Should I be concerned I fapped to this?

Comment posted by HellBreaker deleted Mar 28th, 2018

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You should not, it is all fantasy~.

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For some reason there were two of the same comment, so I got rid of one, just so you know

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I saw that too, was a bit weird, but not a problem at all.

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it's done so that it can be interpreted diner way and works for fans of either willing or non-smoking.

...Trouble with autocorrect?

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