This is something I wrote in two days for practice on how to get into a character's mind and be more descriptive. I hope you like it!
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Moon_Fire
Writer and idea-maker. I'm also a gamer (Nightfire170295 if you want to add me on Xbox).
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Woah...
That was deep and amazing. I like it... Also, in the last line, Luna came back, right? For a minute, I thought it might be her dieing. But I'm weird and think weird. 
This definitely got my fave!
7956630 Yes, she did make it back to Equestria there, I was just trying to let the reader infer what happened after that.