Incident Delta is the most important of the pre-war incidents in determining strategic goals, tactical dangers, and the capacity of the enemy in maintaining a war. The following is pieced together through a compilation of security footage, diary entries from main examiners, and subsequent inquiries regarding unknown equinoid species alpha, beta, gamma and the theorised delta. See figs. 1-5 for equinoid musculature, which was assumed reading for this report.
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This got my attention. Nice!
Sooo...from what I can gather, you just killed off the Mane 6 via dissection, disembowelment, and finally, imolation...you've got guts, I'll give you that. I like the format, helps put it in your head that this is an investigation, and the occasional GrimDark is always nice. I'm looking forward to more.
cool!
Very nice. I'd recommend having someone with editing skill look over it to catch out some of the errors and whatnot you missed, but I enjoyed what I read quite a bit.
Heh, I guess it says something that people enjoyed this lurking horror of a fic.
46906 Problem is, most everyone with editing skill who could give it a read would rather go kiss an Elder God than do so. I know I would.
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I'd rather jump in a lake than read this, and I wrote it. I hate it.
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Hey, fair is fair. I've known fantastic editors who are willing to slog through infinitely worse, though. Good luck to the writer regardless.
>Completed
What. ;_;
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Like it? :P
It was nice, fairly well written, and interesting but I would like to know this: Why did you write it if you hate it?
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Because I wrote the first bit in one of my Cupcakes phases, in about a day. After about a month or so since then, I was asked to finish it. It took me almost a week to actually finish it.
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Ah, thanks on that, good to know.
If it helps, read this and the accosiated works written by the same author
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7132369/1/A_Precious_Rainbow
Dsarker, what the hell were you on when you wrote this
10/10
well now those stupid humans are fucked
Uhm... Okay, so the Imperium of Man just declared war on the Equestrian nation. Considering they just tortured and brutally murdered the six most important Ponies under the Princesses, Humanity is now screwed. Considering that at least one, potentially _all_ of them were close, personal friends of both Princesses, Ponies to whom they owed great debts of gratitude.... Well, I believe there is another galaxy out there somewhere - last one there suffers unimaginable horrors at the hooves of an enraged deity?
And yes, this fic works brilliantly. Unfortunately, it feels incomplete.
Why are the ponies able to regenerate?