Pen Name seems to be suffering from a bad case of writer's block. To Pen, he can't figure out why he's not able to put anything down on paper. Is it simply because of something that happened to him?
As an orca pony swims one night among the fiery monuments of a global conflict, she finds a sailor freezing to death in the arctic cold. She has only one question for him.
Preparations halt when Princess Celestia forbids the playing of the Equestrian national anthem at a concert after a copy of its original is discovered to still exist. Despite her warnings, Octavia Melody endeavors to uncover the truth.
She is out of his life, leaving a heartbroken stallion to waste his night underneath the lights of a neon moon. Drink after drink, he reminisces the times he spent with her and the mistakes he made.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and felt myself starting to feel a tad bit of sympathy for the poor stallion. Any story that can make me convey feelings is a good one!
7938678 I think everyone has been there at some point in their lives, which is sorta why I wrote it... but the main reason was just to get a story out about the true reality of how most relationships end now-a-days. Besides, I am kinda sick of shipping stories on here as well.
This was very good. Probably not favorite-worthy (as in, it's probably not the kind of thing I'd reread), but it was awesome nonetheless. There were only a few mistakes.
like a torn or a nail pricked into the side of your back
I assume you meant "thorn"?
Her personally was amazing as well, great sense of humor,
First, I think you meant "personality." Second, I think (but am not sure) that the first comma should be a colon.
we truly got to know about each other’s more personal selfs
"Selves," you mean?
Also - and this is just my opinion - I would have loved to see this end with the classic "I need a[nother] drink." Cliche, yet satisfying.
Another sadly beautiful fic... Different than More Than A Memory but still sadly beautiful. Now I'm in mood for more. This is going to be a long night.
Wow..... This makes me think of my relationship.... That was the most sadest, most beautiful, most tragically romantic story I've read so far. I wanna cry. This is amazing.
I planned to do a reading of this and it's sequel I'm almost done with the narration portion of this one unless you plan on rewriting this and the sequel since I heard you were gonna rewrite some of your stories
Watch your broken dreams dance in and out of the beams of a neon moon
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and felt myself starting to feel a tad bit of sympathy for the poor stallion. Any story that can make me convey feelings is a good one!
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7938654 Thank you very much for those kind words.
7938668 Of course! I must give an author recognition for a well written story!
Hm. All read.
Partially been there before.
7938678 I think everyone has been there at some point in their lives, which is sorta why I wrote it... but the main reason was just to get a story out about the true reality of how most relationships end now-a-days. Besides, I am kinda sick of shipping stories on here as well.
7938688 Shipping the ship
This seems very intriguing mate. It's not too often that you see a story meant to touch the heart in this way.
This was very good. Probably not favorite-worthy (as in, it's probably not the kind of thing I'd reread), but it was awesome nonetheless. There were only a few mistakes.
I assume you meant "thorn"?
First, I think you meant "personality." Second, I think (but am not sure) that the first comma should be a colon.
"Selves," you mean?
Also - and this is just my opinion - I would have loved to see this end with the classic "I need a[nother] drink." Cliche, yet satisfying.
7942164 Fixed and I managed to add a little something towards the end. Thank you.
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Oh, please. the pleasure was mine!
Maybe you'll do the same for me when you have time?
Another sadly beautiful fic... Different than More Than A Memory but still sadly beautiful. Now I'm in mood for more. This is going to be a long night.
This story demonstrates how difficult love can be. It's nice, leisurely, and relaxed. Not for the adventure readers, but for the hopeless romantics.
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I'm a hopeless romantic, so yeah... Also, this is one great fic to read while drunk!
Wow..... This makes me think of my relationship.... That was the most sadest, most beautiful, most tragically romantic story I've read so far. I wanna cry. This is amazing.
I planned to do a reading of this and it's sequel I'm almost done with the narration portion of this one unless you plan on rewriting this and the sequel since I heard you were gonna rewrite some of your stories