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Nugget


"Hi! I'm Nugget, and I'm your friend to the end. Haydeeho! Ha ha ha!"

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She is out of his life, leaving a heartbroken stallion to waste his night underneath the lights of a neon moon. Drink after drink, he reminisces the times he spent with her and the mistakes he made.


Edited by tommal

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Watch your broken dreams dance in and out of the beams of a neon moon:coolphoto:

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and felt myself starting to feel a tad bit of sympathy for the poor stallion. Any story that can make me convey feelings is a good one!

7938654 Thank you very much for those kind words. :twilightsmile:

7938668 Of course! I must give an author recognition for a well written story!

Hm. All read.
Partially been there before.:coolphoto:

7938678 I think everyone has been there at some point in their lives, which is sorta why I wrote it... but the main reason was just to get a story out about the true reality of how most relationships end now-a-days. Besides, I am kinda sick of shipping stories on here as well. :rainbowwild:

This seems very intriguing mate. It's not too often that you see a story meant to touch the heart in this way.

This was very good. Probably not favorite-worthy (as in, it's probably not the kind of thing I'd reread), but it was awesome nonetheless. There were only a few mistakes.

like a torn or a nail pricked into the side of your back

I assume you meant "thorn"?

Her personally was amazing as well, great sense of humor,

First, I think you meant "personality." Second, I think (but am not sure) that the first comma should be a colon.

we truly got to know about each other’s more personal selfs

"Selves," you mean?

Also - and this is just my opinion - I would have loved to see this end with the classic "I need a[nother] drink." Cliche, yet satisfying.

7942164 Fixed and I managed to add a little something towards the end. Thank you. :twilightsmile:

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Oh, please. the pleasure was mine! :scootangel:

Maybe you'll do the same for me when you have time?

Another sadly beautiful fic... Different than More Than A Memory but still sadly beautiful. Now I'm in mood for more. This is going to be a long night. :unsuresweetie:

This story demonstrates how difficult love can be. It's nice, leisurely, and relaxed. Not for the adventure readers, but for the hopeless romantics. :raritywink:

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I'm a hopeless romantic, so yeah... Also, this is one great fic to read while drunk! :rainbowwild:

Wow..... This makes me think of my relationship.... That was the most sadest, most beautiful, most tragically romantic story I've read so far. I wanna cry. This is amazing. :fluttershyouch:

I planned to do a reading of this and it's sequel I'm almost done with the narration portion of this one unless you plan on rewriting this and the sequel since I heard you were gonna rewrite some of your stories

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