• Member Since 18th May, 2014
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Chaotic Flier

Hello I've been gone awhile, but now that i have some free time i thought i'd continue my stories. Anywho if you have a question or suggestion just lemme know

Chaotic Flier Joined 18th May, 2014 · Offline

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The Red Parade
The Red Parade #1 · Mar 8th, 2018 · · · 1-strangers on the train ·
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I really enjoyed your pacing. The story seems to be moving at a good pace, setting up the scene and the world that will be explored. There are a few grammar issues, and for that, I would recommend a program like Grammarly or Prowritingaid or ask for an editor. But overall, good job!

Hope this helps,

- Red Fox

Luna keeper of dreams
Luna keeper of dreams #3 · Apr 5th, 2018 · · · 1-strangers on the train ·
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I like where this seems to be heading.:twilightsmile:

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