I became hooked on mlp when my friend showed me a YTPMV on YouTube in around 2010.
Did you know that Princess Celestia and Princess Luna had a sister? Did you know that that particular sister is Luna's twin? This is her story. Or should I say, MY story. But, can you take the suspense and thrill of my adventures? Let's. Find. Out.
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Is this a joke?
7897866 This is my first story. It will get better. Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye. I honestly wasn't expecting them to approve it so soon. If you have something you think might improve the story, then let me know. I would really appreciate it. So pleeeeeaaaaase give me a chance.
By the way, it won't have any sex for several chapters. Sorry to disappoint, but this is just the prologue. I thought it would be best to wait till Princess Angel is a little older before I add any sexual content. And. Spoiler alert!!!!! It will eventually involve the mane six as well.
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You, uh, may want to change the tags to reflect that. Teen>Sex Tag is only for oblique references to the act, not the act itself.
7898147 I'll get right on that. Thanks for the feedback.
Just so everypony knows, updates to this story may be one or two weeks in between, what with work and all. Plus I don't have a home computer, so I have to go to the library to write it. I thank you in advance for your patience.
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7897935 Try these: http://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/916/school-for-new-writers
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/197295/authors-helping-authors
7898959 Thank you for the suggestions. I'll look into them.
There's a total of three rhetorical questions in the description. That's three too many. A description shouldn't be a bland high school hook, rather a concise summary of what the story contains.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
I just updated the tags on this story so don't be alarmed about the changes.