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Misty Wisty
A Australian writer that is new to writing fan fictions.
Misty Wisty
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So by the looks of it the story has gotten a mostly positive reaction so far. Thank you all again for reading, and it would mean a lot to know if you like the story. Or hated, either that be thanks to the kinks or to my writing style.
The story is great, i'm actually quite fond of many of the kinks here. One thing you might benefit from though is a proof reader. You have many words capitalized that really shouldn't be. Otherwise, great work.
pleeeease continue
Not bad at all.
Good story
Tip though, Put different people speaking, on different lines
It kept confusing me as to who was saying what and messed up the flow of the story
7767171 thank you, I have seen the technique used on different story's but I wanted to try this, next update I do for this story I'll be sure to use different lines for when others are talking.
7756393 will be soon
7756005 I wouldn't actually know who to ask to proof read a clop fic because all my friends think I'm pure ;w;
I think you rushed the writing, but I am looking forward to see more soon.
How do I know this story won't die after only one chapter?
8492569
U might be right
Mrm