Starlight Glimmer keeps thinking about part of her past and plans to prank Spike with Twilight Sparkle to make it go away.
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Spike should get them back with an awesome prank.
7750909 I 2nd that!
Well that's drastic; even for her standards. (That could even be a story of its own.)
Nice idea, Starlight.
Small suggestion: Have a look at the Fimfiction Writing Guide.
Especially here and here. That way you could further improve your writing.
Ok good premise but way to fast paced and could use more detail like a room scuffed up to make it look like they argued and it got outta hand
Okay, I’m far from being a professional writer, but even I know this is badly written. The concept is good but the execution falls short.
I love how calm the three of them are about this