• Published 21st Oct 2016
  • 185 Views, 3 Comments

Failed Scare - Moonlit Path



The Cutie Mark Crusaders attempt to write a story for Nightmare Night. Blood, fire, revenge, and stupidity ensue.

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Comments ( 3 )

Not bad O.O The part with the gore was actually well written, even though there are certain parts that could've taken a better turn than they did, this was still pretty freaky :pinkiecrazy: 7/10

You'll need an editor and a proofreader for this.

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