Equestria. Nopony knows what its true History is, or how Alicorns seem to possess the traits of all three pony races. What is the Background story?
A tale of revenge and deceit. An old, forgotten story of the six Noble Alicorns. The six Elements of Harmony. And, In a time of change, and tragedy.... Romance? If you are interested in alternate universy stuff, then read this.
What do you guys think of the cover? I drew it, but I'm not going to tell you which Alicorn it is supposed to be! :) That is for you to decide.
Chapters (9)
Woahwoahwoah. Are the six alicorns going to be who I THINK they're going to be? :l
Okay that makes it somewhat interesting.
Though, with the description, it looks like you've pretty much just reversed the roles of Luna and Celestia. I hope you're not going to tell that same story that I'm guessing you're going to tell except for changing some plot details just to fit in with the changed characters with that.
It's not enough for me to really rate it yet. Also, get an editor, or re-read it again yourself. I saw some typos and punctuational errors in it just in a first read-through.
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Well... That depends
This is my first fanfic, so I have a couple typos 'cause I'm not quite used to writing yet. I do have a friend, though, and they say they'll be my editor.
I personally think that this story will take an "Unexpected Twist" (Seriously!) and i hope everyone will like it.
Thanx for being my first commenter!
I will definantly be looking forward to he next chapter. This is looking good so far
That's Twilight's cutie mark, you didn't need to tell us.
I'm quite liking this, it expands on Equestrian history; a bold move seeing as there is little canon to go on, but when pulled off, and pulled off well... I have great hopes for this, it looks extremely promising.
I will say right now that I don't like the Luna/Celestia inversion thing, it's just not my thing. But the story is really good overall and I shall continue to read it. Also the backstory is really good and I really enjoy that part so far the most.
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Ah, look more closely at the Cutie Mark; it is not exactly the same. Is it her Cutie Mark or is it a representation of the Element of Magic...?
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Thanx! I'll have the next chapter out soon!
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Thanx. I like adding backstory too, and I'm glad you like it! The backstory will continue for a few more chapters, before it goes to the modern Equestria, so...
This is very interesting so far. It was added to the Alicorn Twilight group, however. Since there isn't any alicorn transformation yet, I have two options for this story. One, I can remove it from the group. If Twilight does become an alicorn later, it can be readded to the group. Two, I can add it to the Upcoming Transformation folder. This would allow it to stay in the group and be recategorized later. However, if I do this, that could be a pretty big spoiler.
What would you prefer me to do?
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Well.... maybe if you removed it from the group, I could add it back in a few chapters. These next few chapters are basically going to be the background info so that people can have a better understanding of everything. Once it gets back to modern Equestria, however, things will speed right up!
1192475 Okay, no problem! Whichever you prefer, haha. I'll keep my eye on this story as well. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Heh heh... I know that this is a short chapter, but the next ones will be longer, promise!
I've just been busy with my other story, and I have been catching up with all of the summer assignments that I procrastinated on. (Apparently, when the teachers tell you not to procrastinate, they're being serious! Darn AP gov!)
Well, hope you guys like it!
Don't worry about the length too much, I find that these Myth-like origin stories are nice and concise, plus, at the rate they're coming, I can hardly complain. Keep up the good work.
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Thanx! I'm glad you like it!
Couldn't help putting that hunger games referance at the end could you?
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Yeah...pretty much! hunger games are epic!
1199618 Hahaha, Fair enough.
Cool stuff, I like it.
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And I can see how Flamentia would be pissed at the ev
Nice, though I have searched the internet before and I found the word Nightmare does have a true opposite: Daymare. (It's a nightmare one experiences while awake, but only if the person has faced severe traumatic events.)
If you want a link for proof, search the word at dictionary.reference.com
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That actually makes a lot more sense though, and sounds worse than Nightmares. Now that you mention it, "Daymare" sound a lot less cliche than "Lightmare", and it might add some character... *thinks*
Heh, heh... I just thought "Lightmare" sounded cool 'cause it rhymes with "Nightmare".
I think I'll take that suggestion and edit that.
Thank you for your input!
Glad you like it! 
me want more.
It''s a Saturday and I haven't been a prick all week soooooooooo...
Author's Note- Well, I hope it wasn't to obvious...
OH YAH, IT WAS A GOOD CHAPTER TOO!
I hope this means that the rest of the story kicks in.(As well as longer chapters maybe???)
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Thanx! 
Yeah, I'm working on the next chapter as we speak; could be out in a few hours. And they'll be longer, just because it's taking place regular time. But... don't count on chapters coming out as fast as these three, I've just been having some downtime and inspirational spurts!
Wow... "Inspirational Spurts" sound like a type of disease...
I dont speak grammar gud...
Thanx! 
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heh heh...
Night?
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Eh, thanx for pointing that out! All of this day vs. night stuff is confusing when writing it! Just got it edited!
I am just looking forward to what happens next. And I don't mind skipping meeting the elements not like we haven't read about 50 or so stories repeating the same thing anyway.
For the New Lunar Republic! CHARGE!
I don`t usually read dark or alternative universe fics but this actually looks rather interesting. Keep it up.
I really liked your interpretation of the story of each ponies`s cutiemark tales. I absolutely loved it. And you should definitely keep working on this. You are a really good writer and you should be most proud.
I am very much intrigued. It`s interesting to see how the elements of harmony started and who their creators were. When I came down to write this I was dissapointed how no one else had posted a comment.
Which makes me sad. Your writing is very good.
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I'm glad you like the story! I just had this idea for a while, and it's finally coming down into words. 
Thanx, thanx, and thanx again!
Not a huge fan on Luna and Celestia being switched, for it messes up both of their personalities. But I guess I could give it a try.
seems good, looking forward to where this is going
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Thanx! Hope you like!
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Well, I'm gonna try to make this one different... I've read some switched fics, and I haven't seen my idea... Be assured, it'll be different
Hunger games FTW! The alicorn on the cover looks a lot like Rarity to me, with some Twilight-ness and some resemblance of Cadence too. Hmm... I shall read on and try to guess better after chapter 2.
I agree with Sparkle Writer. This is a very interesting story.
Discuerdo?... Discord??? Well, he did laugh a lot, and the chaos he created was very entertaining, so that would make sense. Chrysalis being element of kindness seems strange, but i suppose the show's Chrysalis's attack on Canterlot could be seen as kindness - she was trying to get her people food, so yeah, it sorta makes sense in a way. I'm very, very interested as to where this is headed.
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Thanx! I'm glad you like!!!
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That Alicorn on the cover picture is Twilight actually. This is one of her pictures on deviant art, i should know because me and LulamoonSparkle are good friends on deviant art.