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SammyRosePony


I'm a 16 year old fan of MLP. I am an aspiring artist with a love for drawing ponies. My writing may not be perfect, but I love to do it anyway.

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Many years after the Fall Formal, Battle of the Bands, Friendship Games, and Camp Everfree trip, CHS seems to be calm. Previous CHS student, Sunset Shimmer, is now married and has children of her own. It seems to be she is happy with her life, but she feels like she is missing something in her life. What more could Sunset want?

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A really nice idea, expressed in admirably few words. I guess specifics are what could make it better; maybe a mundane task or sight in Sunset's present life revokes a particular and surprising precious memory, p[erhaps from Equestria or related to Twilight, to give that a little forshadowing (but not too much, the surprise at the end was good). Her emotional openness with Twilight might remind her how she shared feelings with her friends much more in the past. Looking forward to more stories.

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