Vampires don't exist.
Or do they? I mean, what do the little ponies in Equestria know about this sort of thing? Well, not really that much, at least in terms of Vinyl Scratch's favorite hunting spot. They are so blissfully clueless that Vinyl can mingle among them while they remain completely unaware of the supernatural.
Love blossoms in many mysterious places, for mysterious reasons.
But vampires and ponies... that can't end well. It's like an eagle loving a fish, and not just for food. So what happens next? Who knows...
Rated Teen for: mild gore and perhaps a few hints towards adult themes. Also, a tad bit of language, but nothing serious.
Have fun!
The cover art is temporary, I'm working on a new one and it'll be out in maybe.. a few weeks, because I'm lazy.. >_<
Also: This is slightly based on a comic on YouTube known as 'Adapting to Night', by Scribbler Productions
If anyone has suggestions, they are always appreciated. I'm working on the next chapter as of now, and I'll try to get it out soon, but I have a lot to do... :P
Peace!
The picture is identical to the "My roommate is a vampire."
7667417 That is completely unintentional. It just so happens that this is the best Vinyl Scratch picture I found on the internet..
7667149 I'm glad you think so :)
Looking for an editor, PM me if you're interested. I know that my grammar is not by any means, perfect, and I would like some help correcting that, along with spelling, etc.
No dam it! Don't tell him!
Shoulda fed...
Oh well. Cool story bro.
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Thank you! I wanted to play around with how Moonlight would react ;)
I am working on the next chapter, so it'll be out shortly. And I have great plans! (insert evil laugh here)
7695990 go girl. Get ur evil laugh on!
7696970 It's almost out, I just have to do a little editing on my PC ( I'm currently on my phone)
7698495 bite his head off!
PSYCHOGIRL POWER7698748 XD I'm Sky, and I approve that message
7698776 Sky everybody! Let's all clap for Sky!
They have nuclear weapons if we don't, right?
Yeah.
7699320 Wait... does that mean I get to blow crap up?
7700478 I just realized. I said I have great plans:
Update: I forgot my plans.
I can't wait this is a good story
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Pinkie Plan: Cupcakes!
Sky's plan: Chainsaws and grasshoppers!
Yet Sky is still behind Pinkie in the Most Crazy Pony Election
7701554 Thank you!
7701759 Wait.. grasshoppers?? Did I miss something here?
7704164 no you definitely did, and yes, you definitely didn't.
7704595 K then.
7704797 okie dokie lokie!
Not bad, I've seen better, but I've also seen much, much worse. The biggest problem I have with this is the whole thing seems rushed. Try being more descriptive and try to capture the personalities of the characters in their dialogue and the personality of the narrator in between the dialogue. This will be hard, but I feel like you're up to it. This feels like you're trying to tell a story, which isn't a bad thing, but you could also be showing us the story, and allow that to tell it for you. Don't give up on this, either. If you give up, you won't learn, and to quote the legendary Counter Strike YouTuber 3kliksphilip "If you complete a project without learning something, you've done it wrong."
I look forward to seeing how much you can improve from this story.
This is awesome
MOAR!
But wait, all of a sudden Melody loves Moonlight?
7705625 Thanks for the suggestions. I feel like it's rushed too, but I was thinking that I would outline the story while still actully writing it, and then after I have basically the entire story, I would go back and make it even better with suggestions :D
It's not really like writing an outline, it's more like "I'm gonna write it then write it again" or whatever >_<
7705663 Thank you! :)
7705842 ;)
You're an artist? Can I please see an example of your work?
This chapter was very short, but much better written than the last chapters. The only complaint about this that I have is that it is way too short.
Moar!
7748618 I know that it was short, but I feel like that was one of the better ways to end it, rather than blabbering on about unimportant drivel :I
And it's almost 1,000 words... ._. I have chapters in another story that are less than 600 words.
I do appreciate that you, and every(pony) body else is reading it, and hopefully enjoying it tho :D
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I know, I should judge based on what you have instead of what others do, but that is very hard to do. I know of a story that has a single chapter of over thirty-four thousand words, if I am not mistaken. The Night is Passing, by Cynewulf is the story. Still haven't read it yet, probably just a little intimidated by thirty-four thousand word chapters, and a total word count of over five hundred thousand. So there is a too long and a too short for a lot of people. My best advice is to try to keep the chapter lengths consistent. Something for us to expect, and a visible goal for you to push for.
7748501 I'm afraid I'm not very good at digital, but perhaps. I think think this is a matter for private chat, however.
7751019 I just remembered to close my gaping maw at that. I don't even have that many words in the entire story
While the chapters have drastically increased in both quality and consistency, they still feel short, maybe even a bit choppy. This chapter and the last could have been one single chapter separated by a line.
Anyway, not bad at all, look forward to seeing more.
Yay!
7783765 I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it so far.
The reason the chapters are quite short is that I'm rather used to creating short two or three page stories, not several chapter long novels. I do want to pursue a career in writing as an author, so this is great practice, and I really appreciate the feedback.
Please hurry and get the next chapter out man I CANT WAIT!
7844470 Sorry, sorry! Relatives and all that over Christmas... it's hectic.
7845198 'Kay missed u btw
7846732 Oh, thank you!
I missed you, and this site, and writing. Is it legal to marry a verb, I wonder?
this story still on hiatus?