I'm not one to write much, I make reviews for cartoons on Youtube, but I do like to write from time to time, even if my grammar might be a little off.
When Twilight receives a threatening message, Ponyville begins to be plagued with murders from what appears to be The Mysterious Mare Do Well. What is actually going on here!?
Inspired by the episode The Mysterious Mare Do Well and MTV'S Scream.
Page generated in 0.1 seconds
Total duration
638 users online
896,420 hits today, 2,205,040 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Way to start. Killing Rainbow Dash first.
Liked.
And faved for no reason.
I haven't even started reading and I faved and liked.
Ok now I have read it and I love dove dove it!
7537348 Thanks so much! I have a lot more planned for this story. The thing is, even I don't know who the killer is, I haven't decided that yet.
7537519 I think it's AJ, With Starlight helping.
7537615 Well, don't forget. AJ was in the castle with the others while all that stuff was going down, so take that into account.
7537699 Starlight was depressed. AJ was the 2nd to leave the group. Starlight is a strong magic user. Starlight wasn't killed.
Why is it always Rainbow Dash!? Tbh, despite some grammar issues, this was actually quite compelling. I have a feeling of where this is going, seeing I've seen all the "Scream" movies, and know that the Mare Do Well isn't working alone. Great job for a start, look forward to reading the next chapter later on.
Welcome to your nightmare.
Though I actually wonder who's the lucky pony as Mare Do Well.
And here's a tip, don't be blunt around deaths of other ponies, make them feel realistic. Rather than like:
"...Rainbow's.. dead!"
Make it like;
"R-R-Rai-Rainbow's.." She shivered and sniffled. ", dead!" She broke down.
Just a tip.
I'm sorry Twilight, but your cheating. Now I need to punish you. And when I say you, I mean your friends.
Just imagine if Mare Do Well knew she was cheating and planned to kill EVERYPONY in Equestria.
WOW no response from anypony ok. It's the step father's first wife... Hahahahahahahahahahaha hah! It's actually Shining Armor whole the time... wow what a twist. I like it.
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Please tell me it's all a prank and nopony's dead!
OH CRAP...!
I got a 4+, F***!
Still, if that's Shining, bravo.
Thought I'd let you all know that as the next chapter is the last chapter, it will be much shorter just to close everything up.