Jonathan's been fairly content with life in Equestria, having made friends in the Mane 6 - primarily Fluttershy. Despite this, he is STILL plagued by nightmares. However, one in particular begins to - disturbingly - come to life. HiE, HumanXFlutterba
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Ah, this again.
Awesome start man! Can't wait to read more stories from you
May I ask for the name of the Artist of the cover art?
Great celestia that was some crazy shit. I can't wait to read more.
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T'would be Slugbox. Very talented individual.
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What can I say? I'm a sucker for your standard HiE stories :p
I'll try mixing it up in future though, since I know some people aren't fans of that kinda thing. c:
A fantastic job! Raunchy, sweet and well written. Keep up the great work my friend.
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Many thanks! I'll be sure to. :)
The clop was hit, the scenes between Fluttershy and John were sweet, and you did a good job of portraying a hunting Flutterbat (part of me wonders what she'd have done if John hadn't snapped her out of it). Not bad for a first story. Have a fav.
No words needed
Very nicely done although I would have liked to seen flutterbat put those fangs to a little use maybe just a nibble
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I'd thought of implementing that, but I feel like the taste of blood would make her go...primal. And, really, in John's situation, that would've been an awfully bad occurrence :p
7482776yeah that's true you know what might be fun do a sequel where she turns every full moon and as she gets more comfortable with her batpony form she could try it out.
Totally thought he would of bit the dust at the end.
This is easily the best Flutterbat story I've found, both on terms of writing and (admittedly short) storyline.
You, sir, win an Internet.
Nay, two! Two for having to suffer under the tyrant that is iPad typing. I've only typed about 1'500 words on mine, and I wanted to shoot myself multiple times during that process. Excellent work.
Wow just wow... 10/10
Wow, pretty damn good story, nice happy ending...and it was written by a cheeky Britain!? Yea, I'm gonna keep a close eye on you, perhaps we could even do a collaboration one day.
Ah, a man of culture I see.