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Genderswapped


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Dusk is pissed off because his number 1 assistant is killed by Queen Umbra. Queen Umbra uses his rage in order to make sure someone strong enough takes her place as ruler of Equestria. He becomes a tyrant just like her, but more powerful. He seizes control. A year later of fighting with Dusk's forces Solaris has had enough. So as the saying goes, in order to beat a monster you have to make a monster. Umbra had already made a monster for them. After this then what happens next.

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I can't wait to see more of this story

Um... This could have been good if you had spaced it out. This is just rushed and confusing to read. If you had separated it into at least four chapters it would have made more sense and would have been better. Just suggesting that you should have spaced it a bit more and added context. Like alot more .

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