You are cordially invited to the 11th Birthday party of Miss. Bow Trim.
The social gathering of the season shall take place on the 11th of April at 1pm sharp, located at the Trim family Manor.
Our magnanimous host, Miss. Ribbon, would like to inform you that the theme of this social affair will be the Equestrian's Royalty, mostly concerned with the popular Princess Twilight Sparkle, whom will be in attendance.
Soft Pencil is a young filly with a passion for her pencilled and sketched art; and bad luck at making friends. Out of the blue, she is invited to a party for perhaps the most popular and wealthy filly in school; Bow Trim. While everypony else is excited about this party, Soft Pencil only feels dread.
‘What do you buy a filly that has everything?’ Whilst the other guests go out to buy expensive gifts, Soft Pencil hopes find something that means more.
Edited by RC2101_Copey
After reading the description I will recommend you track down an editor as there are a lot of errors in it and that can turn people off from reading your work.
Other than some technical errors, not bad
I don't know why, but I quite like this.
Is this a romance story?
7413133 No, I'd tell you what's its really about but that would be spoiling some things