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Violet Flash is just another stallion that resides in Ponyville, except he has a problem.

He is the only adult that doesn't have a cutie mark.

But before he can fix that, he needs to overcome his past and his fear of being a failure.

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Shadows of the Past · 21st Jun 2012 · 1,759 words
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Problem Solving, Berry Punch Style · 23rd Jun 2012 · 2,321 words
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Dusty Sage

Dusty Sage #1 · Jun 23rd, 2012 · · · Problem Solving, Berry Punch Style ·

This has some serious potential: we've seen the CMC go just-this-side-of-berserk over flank blankness, but a full-grown stallion? The longer the frustration has to build, the worse it gets. Having had similar thoughts myself more than once upon a time, I'll have to see this story through.

Semicolon Dash

Semicolon Dash #2 · Jun 23rd, 2012 · · · Problem Solving, Berry Punch Style ·

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Thanks! And that's sort of the intention, that sort of frustration where everyone tells you "kid, you're gonna be somebody" and when the time comes and you realize that you are just another nobody; how do you come to terms with that? I think it's a pretty common human (and pony) experience.