A mysterious pony wakes up one day to find himself caught in a dark jail cell with no recollection of his past.
All he knows are a few random tidbits and commonplace facts.
Trapped in this cell with no memory and no interaction, he finds himself lost in thought, trying to discover what happened. What do his memories hide, and how far will have to go to discover their secrets?
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Pretty good story, even with the grammar errors. My tips for you will be to make longer chapters and keep the story more coherent, but other than that can't wait to see how this story turns out. Keep up the good work!
Quill on skull = philosopher right? Anyway, you've got something here.
It was much more? different than the concrete of the cell and when I held it, I felt the strangest sense of inspiration.
If something can turn something so hopeless and give beauty and inspiration. Can't seem to wrap my head around this. The two somethings are confusing me.
Other than that, good.
Hmm...I don't have much to say here. The short chapters help break the narration so it doesn't feel like a chore to read it all at once. Keep it up, I'm curious as to whether that rock is Equestria or just a model and if he will survive and gain freedom.
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Dang, shhh you'll ruin the surprise! But yes, he is a philosopony. Though the story behind why he got his cutie mark is... interesting. I'll get to that later though, much later =P
Thanks for the good vibes though, both of you.
Mmm, yep... Not much to say here, glad he's out and the story can move on though. Gotta answer a few things though: where are the guards, what is that rock, how much hair did he have?!, and why was he there. There are many more questions to be answered, of course, but those are my top questions.
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He had a fair bit of mane, but naturally he is a bit patchy now, though he had a fair bit of black, so I'm sure nopony will notice too much. Well... that's his hope at least. Plus, he wasn't going that heavy with the breadcrumb trail, just enough to be noticeable; his red was pretty vibrant.
But as the rest of your questions, unfortunately those will be answered later in the story. Everything that you've seen really builds up to the conclusion. It's just a matter of getting there.
(The story isn't meant to be terribly long, I'd say it won't be longer than 8-9 chapters really.)
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Oh, cool. I like the shorter stories because things aren't drawn out to boring and forgettable levels.