Citrus Recluse
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Any chance that the Power Ponies keep the Large tits and milk producing ability, because I would love to see them keep that ability just without any mind control effects that originally came with it.
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All signs point to no.
I wonder what the gas from that rose was supposed to do
Is there much chance of a Bad End to this one?
Perhaps one where the answer to the child-proofing question was just "yes"...
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No, not really.
7735659 Fair enough, thanks for replying.
I thought that part of the reason the Contessa lost last time was because she couldn't change the bodies of males? And also that the Power Ponies were too dazed by their own boobs when under her control to fight or use their powers? Major fail, and the storyline is severely lacking, downvote
Still, not sorry I read it, and I still love the first story
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I don't remember writing it that way - I thought she lost because she overlooked one male sidekick in particular.
EDIT: Oh, uh. Hmm. I just double-checked. So it is... that's... really quite odd. I coulda sworn.... huh. That's, um, ...
Yeah, that's a fail alright.
7736122 I was all ready to quote that passage before I saw your edit
7736122 You really have to try to put more explanation in your stories in my opinion, like cramming all the DC superheroes into this story with no clarity on whether they're ponies and if so what they look like, as you mentioned, the Mighty Endowed being mostly a plot device to get the Contessa out of jail, and so little detail and background. This story felt seriously rushed and underdone, which cut the fun of it for me
...I admit though, I enjoyed the guards annoying the Contessa by not getting her title right or just not calling her that.
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I'm sorry to hear that.
7736431 Oh well, you don't get it right every time
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... is the explanation problem limited to the ones with the Contessa, or does it apply to all of them?
Because, uh, I've been working on a sequel to Mistress Adagio and would really like it for to be good. (But I don't think anything will ever really top Mistress Adagio in my heart.)
7736476 I don't know, the stories of yours I've read are Mistress Midnight, The Tale of Big Boobs the Busty Bimbo, and Most Common Superpower, and they're fine as far as I can tell. Also, since I saw your blog on making a sequel to The Tale of Big Boobs, I hope you use my suggestion of changing the name to Buxom Beauty (of course you're the writer so that sort of decision is yours to make
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DC SUPERHEROES!! AND HEROINES!! MAYBE JUST HEROINES NOT REGARDING THAT ONE REFERENCE TO SUPERMAN!!
Citrus Recluse, you are officially one of my top five favorite fanfic authors.
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Only Top 5? Psshaw.
Not bad, are you going to put another Bad end with the CMC or something like that?
Just seem to be the type of thing for another story.
7747305 see
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