When the turtles are sent to Equestria by a humanized version of the Mane 6, they must fight a creature called the tantabus before it takes over everyone's minds and destroys the world. (Inspired by TMNT meets MLP)
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Moon Princess
I'm just a lame person who writes lame stories about ponies and listens to music all day.
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Standard issues with any story with chapters under 1000 words each. No descriptions of what things look like, no descriptions of the atmosphere. no description of what anyone does or facial expressions so it comes off dull and generic.
Hoo nice is from the TMNT most recent cartoon, right? Neat. ????????
I expected a fight in the forest with some mytical creature, also you are taking it too fast, the story need more character interaction, make them talkt to each other a little more, dont just get to the point and end there conversation. After all, what we like about these cartoons is that they trow a joke or two between these chats
. That just my humble opinion but steal I like the story 
7208499 Thanks for the request! I'll go back and try to fix it as much as I can, although I am currently working on a chapter. I'll remember that for future chapters!
7208499 And also, the turtles might return to the woods one last time to have a fight there. You might be getting that battle soon!
7208405 Sorry about that.
I'll try to do better in later chapters and maybe try to fix it up once I finish this whole thing. 
7208541
I understand it's easy trap to fall into, to want to get to the story so badly you skimp on the details. Remember your trying to paint a mental picture for your reader and they need more than just the basics to "see" what your telling them is happening
Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?
7210769 Yep.
Oo the things need go get even slower,I steal think things go too fast, in one paragraph leo is worried and in the other he feels good enough to think a plan. And I keep forgeting that the mane 6 are supose to be humans
I guess is becouse you call them mane 6 XP. And you use too much the words "The turtles". But other than that I enjoy it, keep it up 
Interesting story, darling. You have a knack for writing. I would suggest that you maybe try an editor, though. There's a whole group on that if you want help
Great story!
Hello. After reading your first version of this story I have to say your writing style has really improved. This is an interesting mix of characters and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Always did like the turtles and their back story. Nice idea to combine the two series into an interesting theme.
7298814 Thank you! After writing the first half of the first version, I took some time away so I could improve my writing skills. Im glad it worked.
Wait, isn't Kraang from the cheesey 19 something series? I'm pretty sure Casey shouldn't even know Kraang. I'm pretty sure the 2012 one is the one with uutrom in it. i just read more of this, sorry... i think i'm talking about the wrong tmnt, because it mentioned April having powers
this was pretty good! i like the idea that they have to fight the tantabus: that's really neat :)
Cute story so far