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The city of Maretropolis, a once beautiful and shining city, now lay in ruin. The zombies have devoured all the inhabitants and left nothing but fields of bones behind. However, one lone mare still reside in this ruined city and she is about to tell you how it all went down.

Update: Cover art is down by KittyBelli24

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Comments ( 13 )

Wait a mintue it's a one shot? Aw man! I wanted to see where this went.

Omg, I creeped out so bad at the scary parts. A few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes here and there, but very well-written overall. Do you mind if I make an art cover for this?:rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by DatWritingPotato deleted May 27th, 2016

7212104 It's finally done! ^^ Hope it's worth the story- http://kittybelli24.deviantart.com/art/Zombiefied-Mane-iac-FanFiction-Cover-Art-611494499
Sorry for taking, like, forever to make it.:twilightblush:

Dear god! What happened to her face!? So no continuation? If so all right

Huzzah! A satisfying conclusion. You sure can have a moustache.:moustache:

A very interesting story; however, the grammatical errors do somewhat disrupt its flow.

In less than a year they have completely devoured all life on their world.

If we’re referring to Marvel Zombies, it took them 3 days.

While disturbing as it was, it shocked everypony when it suddenly started talking. The head spoke, commenting about where he was and why there was a bunch of colorful ponies staring at him. He continued talking, introducing himself as the Merc with only a mouth.

So the Nexus of Reality is in that mirror? Never thought Deadpool would be the one to show up.

Overall, the writing is good, although there are a couple of minor mistakes here and there, it doesn't prevent you from reading.
In general, my biggest question is, if they have retained their sanity, why did their mindset suddenly change so much that they started eating everyone without any problem? Filly Second, remembering their comrades perfectly well and retaining their intelligence, suddenly became hostile towards them. Sounds wildly illogical.

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