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TT: Are you sober enough to do all that? TG: i think TG: the answer TG: unfortunately TG: is yes TG: :[ Hate People, Love Humans.
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Hi guys. Please love my story. This was a request from a brony. I am so fucking drunk.
756026 you think you're drunk?
I'm guzzling Jack Daniels while I'm typing.
Oh yeah? Well I'm drinking tea... WITHOUT ANY MILK.
758187
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Uh.. Right this way sorry to keep you waiting.
I don't get it. Fluttershy just starts sexually assaulting Rainbow, who ends up wanting it anyway. *doesn't fully argue with it*
758187 hahahahahahahaha...omg...omg...ok...breathe...breathe...too funny
not bad, i like how you described the vuvla lol
the fuck
... you sir get a Hope Dis gon B gud! From Thy Princess
... WHERE PART TWO!!! ┬─┬ ︵(╯.º.）╯ Retaliation!
This is not quite very good. Actually, bad.
GET KINKY!!!!!!
It was alright during the beginning, then I got to the middle...
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759129 I'm here.
759327I said GET KINKY I didn't say KINKY come here ugh!!!!!
758316 Thanks for the constructive criticism! I probably should have given Rainbow a bit more motivation, although I wanted to keep it from Fluttershy's perspective. I guess even clop has to be in the spirit of friendship right? I'll keep that in mind if I ever write ero again.
758417 I know, I tend to be really anatomical/biological. That doesn't turn on everyone. Also I wanted to avoid euphemisms like Cunt and Pussy because they're sometimes considered crude.
759018 Your criticism is just as good as your sentence structure.
758948 Sorry, this is a one-off. I have non-ero idea in my head for a longer FIMfic but I don't know if I have the attention span to write the whole thing.
760013 Sorry for my previous lacking sentence structure; I typed that response in about four seconds. I really had no need to provide any more ciritism due to the fact that it had already been given in previous comments. So excuse my lack of great setnece structure and critisim; I have been very busy, but I hope this makes up for it.
Lol really good, you should continue, you should have given Rainbow more motivation, it should have bin longer, you should have used the words such as "Cunt" and "Pussy" in speech, other then that good job lol....
759967 Next time be more specific.
763946My bad I never knew somepony has a name Kinky that's why I said that, but I'll do that next time.
Huh. The only words I can give are "C for Effort," considering that you ended up accomplishing exactly as you planned to, but it's also not very good. A few small errors here and there, general nonsensicalness, etc.
Still, you deserve credit for writing it and not trolling, so, good job.
Great story, but it was pretty short and Fluttershy telling RD to shut up seemed really out of character.
Still, great work.
This was definatly a good clop. congats and take a moustache
the comments are some of the funniest I've ever read though.
Keep readin'
O.O
Wow. That...surely...woke me up
+ 
makes...sum clop there...
I was reading this and...uh...
I sympathize with AJ in the story
Sigh you know what.
i'm going to bed