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When Big Mac is three weeks late for their anniversary, all Rainbow Dash knows is that he'd better have a good reason.

This was written for KarmaDash's MacDash challenge, option #1
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/209113/macindash-community/thread/223474/fic-contest-real-money-prize

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 7 )

“Dibs on not telling AppleJack!” She laughed, putting a foreleg up to her nose.

It's all right Mac. It just means she's the one who gets to tell Cheerilee.

Simple, short, and adorable. Everything I could want in a MacDash proposal story. Very nicely done! :ajsmug:

The elements of harmony, spike, the apple family, the former cutie mark crusaders, the cakes,

These should all be capitalized.

Very enjoyable read. Lots of fun flashbacks of this great couple!

Nice so far, it flows well.

What a wonderful happy reunion!

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