When Big Mac is three weeks late for their anniversary, all Rainbow Dash knows is that he'd better have a good reason.
This was written for KarmaDash's MacDash challenge, option #1
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/209113/macindash-community/thread/223474/fic-contest-real-money-prize
It's all right Mac. It just means she's the one who gets to tell Cheerilee.
Simple, short, and adorable. Everything I could want in a MacDash proposal story. Very nicely done!
These should all be capitalized.
Very enjoyable read. Lots of fun flashbacks of this great couple!
Nice so far, it flows well.
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Good work
What a wonderful happy reunion!