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This is not your typical love story. This is not a story where upon realizing my feelings for Rainbow Dash, I confess my love to her and she confesses back and we live happily ever after. This is a story about my infatuation with my best friend, and my constant fear of letting that secret out. Love isn't always an easy path to take, and it sure as hell ain't no sunshine and fairy tales.

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Rated Teen for cursing and adult themes.

Oh, jeez. I made a humanized AppleDash fic. It's okay, let the dislikes rain down upon me. I've prepared myself. *Opens up umbrella x.x*

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 189 )
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Comment posted by ACTION2234 deleted Oct 24th, 2016

This doesn't deserve the dislikes it has, but humanized Appledash seems to act like a magnet for them. I honestly don't get all the hate about humanized stuff, but to each their own, I suppose. Although the plot is a little familiar (one-sided crush because AJ is "traditional") I'm still quite liking your spin on it. This is well written and I hope you continue it. :twilightsmile:


Not only was I arguing with myself, but I was losing.

I like that line, for some reason. Its simple yet talks about a concept a lot of people probably have experience with. Like when you're trying to calm down before a big test/event yet your brain won't listen and is all, "And what if somehow you got the wrong day or place? And what if you accidentally show up naked?"

Okay, maybe not everyone has experience with that exact feeling, but I think you get my point. :derpytongue2:

Thank you for the support ^^ It's nice to see some positive feedback amongst all the dislikes. :twilightblush:

Not bad. Give us more.

Comment posted by PinkPearl deleted Oct 24th, 2016

Yay! Someone used my avatar as their story art!

(Basically this means I am now obligated to read this fic.)

Hehe, I've been in love with that picture ever since I saw it. And nothing else seemed to fit this story, so yeah xD

Pretty awesome! Can't wait to read more of this.
Looking forward to Spplejack coming clean, I just know its gonna be akward! HA!

It doesn't need a accent. I can't wait for more. Great job so far it's really funny:rainbowlaugh:

Kinda ironic, having cover art with those eyes of that Dash gal's covered up in a story where they're mentioned in the title.

Heh, I agree but it was really hard for me to find any humanized Rainbow Dash art that I actually liked =/

I have a feeling that that swimming thing will end up a little awkward?:rainbowderp:

MY GOD, YES. CHAPTER TWO. YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY, SIR. :heart::heart::heart: Dis shud b gud.

EDIT: A splendid read as expected. I particularly appreciate the way you displayed AJ's jealously. In most of the 'secret-hidden-buried-crush-about-to-rush-up-to-the-surface' fics I've read. usually authors tend to represent the character in her position to be constantly on the verge of tears at any mention of the potential competitor fighting for the love interest's affection. But'chyeah, well done. I have a feeling Applejack will say a few things she may come to regret in this, aha, uh... 'swimming contest'. Lel.

Great chapter, Can't really think why people would dislike humanized AppleDash so much:ajbemused: thinking about the movie that is coming and all:rainbowlaugh: I'm eager to see where this will go, i hope they get together in the end thought. hope you can get out of overused themes like RD get's together with clad, he does something she dosn't want/like break up and AJ lissten to what he did, they end up together kind of fics:twilightblush:

Oh. My. God. This is my life as an MLP fanfic, I swear. I can totally relate to you, Applejack... :ajsleepy:
This is some amazing work.

Haha OHHHH shit. Talk about trolling :trollestia:

Rarity, how dare you not take an interest in psychology. :rainbowderp:

Your evil, you know that? Writing an amazing story then leave us to wonder when the real appledash is coming in! :ajsmug::heart::rainbowlaugh: So evil:flutterrage:

This is an amazing story keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next update!(i'm greedy, so greedy:pinkiecrazy:)


Thanks! I wish I could tell you guys when you'll start to see some AppleDash romance going on, but I wouldn't want to give anything away! :derpytongue2:

You will be the death of me XP


Well you can write more now:twilightsmile:

Why, thank you! ^-^

Always nice to read a chapter of this. looking forward for more. :twilightsheepish:

Love ya. More than you know :pinkiecrazy: ... ;)

You gave Granny Smith a heart attack !!! You monster

Keep up the good work

poor applejack, been in that situation must hurt.

keep up the good work, your writing is getting so much better:twilightsmile:

P.S I crieh erry' nite submerged in melancholia, sugarcewb. Sweet dreams.


Glorious chapter.

Gave me giggles and a few feels.

It's a good chapter. Hope to see more soon.

This is a great little story you've got here. Keep up the good work!

I love it being in AJ's POV.

When I add this story to my favourites, I actually mean it!
I love this story! It's nice to see it from Applejack's POV and I think you wrote Dashie very awesomely :) they're both so relatable

This story is so relatable, I love it! Well paced and well written--I swear I'm checking every other day to see if you've updated it yet.
Ever thought about finding some custom artwork for it? :pinkiehappy:


Thanks so much! ^-^

I did consider getting custom artwork, the only problem is I don't know who would do it x.x And I'm definitely no artist myself. :facehoof:


Well, I've been looking for commission work for a while now...
If you want to think up a scene/describe how you picture each character (other than what you've already illustrated in your story) I could give it a go! :raritystarry:
Shoot me a PM if you want!

Also, might throw this in now--AppleDash is THE one true ship. End of story. :rainbowkiss::ajsmug:

Now normally I don't like to read humanized pony stories. but this story really exceeded all my expectations and more. You really captured the characters persona's (in my opinion) I can't wait to read more. :pinkiehappy:


Thank you so much! ^-^

AAAAGH :flutterrage: Moooar. :raritydespair: I know you've got a life and all... but you're killing me here. :twilightsheepish:

Oh my, for a sec there I thought the AppleDash was in jeopardy. Crisis averted... maybe?
Well, with that said, I think I enjoyed this chapter far more then I should've. mainly 'cause this guy popped up and started getting in the middle of what I want, and I am surprisingly ok with that. Great chapter, as always.

Excellent chapter as always keep it up.

As this being the one and only humanized fic I actually enjoy, I implore you: MORE.

3113489 I agree. I need my daily dose of AppleDash.

Oh my gosh, how weird - I woke up fancying a bit if AppleDash and hoped that Upatree had updated her story - and so she has!
Aw, Applejack and Jack (lol) are cute together... Poor AJ though :(

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