• Member Since 23rd Oct, 2011
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BronyNeumo


Author, dreamer, adventurer, scientist, High Prince of Appledashery, and bonafide lover of sadfics and the Great American Cheeseburger.

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Before you read this, I URGE you, in order to understand much of it, you MUST read this previous series: "To Fix You"

It has been several months since the fateful suicide attempt of a certain cyan pegasus. For Rainbow Dash, her new Marefriend Applejack, and the rest of Ponyville, life has returned to whatever semblance of normality they have previously grown accustomed to. However, when a mysterious stranger appears in town, it seems time to remember that things sometimes can be too good to be true. When confronted with hm, two mares will face a life-changing decision; a decision that could rip them apart no matter how strong the bonds of their relationship were forged. For some ponies, forgiveness is easy. For others, it proves hard to let go. He is a polarizing figure; a stallion who few in Ponyville remember, and those who do mostly wish to forget. His arrival begs the age-old question that is always posed when uncertainty rears its ugly head: What if? What if? What if?

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 151 )

Read the start of it on DeviantArt. Here's to a good ride BronyNeumo!

This is one of the best fics I've read in a long time. I'd love to see it continued!

Dat Cliff hanger O.o Holy shit.

First! Holy crap this is epic! You do Appledash best. Nopony has you beat!

This doesn't mean Applejoy is over does it? As awesome as this is, I'd rather see that story get more chapters. :pinkiesad2:

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It's not over, just postponed until this one is done. (also paused for lack of ideas on my part... I needed a break.)

237715 I totally agree. I have a habit of checking everyday to see if AppleJoy is updated.

237903 hmmm, to be honest, i purposely avoided applejoy because i thought it would become an obsession, but this story i have been waiting so long on, keep up the awesome work, and if you can, i'd love some advice on writing :rainbowkiss:

237903 Oh okay, as long as it's not over take your time. :twilightsmile:

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I think you should give Applejoy a go, people seem to be enjoying it!

As for advice, I believe I sent you a message, did you not receive it?

238723 hmmmm... i sees no message...maybe cause of the maintenance last night :ajbemused:

Also, i read a few stories i have become obsessed with, such as "Study Buddies" by Samasara, and your appledash fic has become one of them.

Also, the main advice i need is HOW THE HELL DO YOU WRITE A FIC WITHOUT IT TAKING OVER YOUR LIFE?

Too late...my life has been conquered by my writing :facehoof:

Holy fuck, holy fuck, and holy muther fuck!

I love this story. :pinkiecrazy:

Yes! Awesome chapter 3 of pure win.

WIN STORY

also, applejacks father called apple cider? :/

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His real name is just 'Cider'. He was given the honorary name 'Apple Cider' when he married into the family.

Or were you not paying attention to the flashback?

267713 the flashback brought tears to my eyes:fluttercry:, but Cider...hmmm...i supposed it's an extraordinary coincidence he ended up with "Apple Cider" instead of marrying some other mare and getting "Rainbow Cider" or "Derpy Cider" :pinkiesmile:

But then again, in Equestria, what isn't an extraordinary coincidence?

Oh right, you're on here too. :derpytongue2: Well, you need the pageviews!

Yes! It's on FimFiction now! No more slumming on dA! (My PC is aging, and can't handle the rapid fire ad reloads that site does now.)

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haha, advertisements. I remember when I didn't have a Premium account...

And it's been on here for weeks now. I'm perplexed as to why it has so few views.

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Is this copy of the fic linked to EqD?

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No, I have EqD link to my dA copy.

278197 Ad block is a wonderful thing, bro.

Dat ending. Also noticed that Big Mac calls every with Miss first, Miss Sparkle, Miss Rarity, ETC, but he calls Fluttershy just plain ol' Fluttershy, am I spying some foreshadowing of a relationship? Only time will tell.... And don't let anyone tell you Fluttermac is overused. It's used as often as it is because they really do make a nice couple. Also, two things, one, first. Two, another great chapter, you have me intrigued with the trapdoor.

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Fluttermac will not be a prominent part of this story. However, it is a prominent part of my other story: "The Applejoy series", and Fluttermac is a part of my head canon. So the reference you picked up on was indeed a nod to their assumed relationship.

293503 I know that, I've read it twice, and the first part of it. Not going to really go into details, don't want to spoil anything for some fool who hasn't read that awesome piece of Appledash. I think I left a comment in one of the chapters explaining why yours is my favorite of all the Appledash fics out there.... At least, that one. This one is a little on the Dark side of the Force, but I'm curious as to where this is going to go... Don't spoil it for me though, I like surprises! :pinkiehappy: <--- When I saw this on the top of my Tracking list

Found some errors, bud:

"As such, whenever she was woken by Rainbow Dahs in the night" Dash

"Ah think Ah might know somethin' to cheer ya up, tough." though

"Her cast her gaze into the dip between hills below her" She

"Applejack was confident that will a little tender loving care" with

"The four friends stood crowded around her" Twilight was around herself?

Was also going to comment on the Fluttershy thing and how I saw a Fluttermac reference in it, but I got beaten to the punch.

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Ugh.

My editor is slipping up. Buck.

killer, can't wait for moar
DAT ENDING:pinkiegasp:

Just to point out an error. Rarity's magic aura is more like a sky blue rather than pale white. and I also have a question. Why, in all the fan fics that I read, do people say "save" instead of "except?" I've seen it so much. I'm not complaining. in fact I like the use of save a lot more than except but, Why?

this story pertaining to the appledash story arch is gonna end in one of two ways, 1) AJ is fed up with RD's unnatural obsession of her, breaks up with her and RD goes completely insane or kills herself. or 2), AJ falls in love with another mare and leaves RD due to her unnatural obsessive behavior, goes completely insane or kills herself. from what i picked up from "to fix you" and this story is that applejack is
Rainbow Dash's only link to the real world and her psyche. Rainbow Dash feels that Applejack is the only thing she has left in the world and doesn't even have the ambition or drive to partake in anything else. and since applejack has made it pretty clear that RD's obsessive behavior is driving her mad, rainbow dash finding appledash will have disastrous results. all though i hope im wrong but i just dont see a happy ending for appledash:pinkiesad2:

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I enjoy it when people try to guess the ending.

Worry not, you're quite far off.

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You know youve written a good story when your readers speculate on how its gonna end:raritywink:

this is a great story dude, really looking forward to the next chapter:pinkiehappy:

can't wait for more of this fic and the applejoy fic!
keep up the great work!

Oh damn, Applejack's in trouble D:

Keep it going man! I'm a sucker for these kinds of stories!

~Parajack :twilightsheepish:

Applejack why! D:

I demand blood of the father :twilightangry2:


Excellent chapter my good man. Never stop writing! :D :pinkiehappy:

shit has hit the fuck

Get struck once, shame on him; get struck twice, shame on you.

...And then Rainbow rescues AJ from the cellar and everypony is happy (except Cider; broken bone at least)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!:fluttershbad::applecry::raritycry:

D-d-did you just killed Applejack off??
Oh god please update as soon as possible wanna know how she's gonna get it over :pinkiehappy:

why must you torture her like that?!

no
n-n-noo
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO:raritydespair:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!:raritycry:

jesus h christ does this author like torturing RD or what? :fluttercry:

Great chapter… until the end. :fluttershysad: Why would you do that!? AJ just have to make it, somehow, for Dash's sake :fluttercry: Poor girl.

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