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Lazydrill
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I quite enjoyed this. There's grammar and punctuation issues that could do to be fixed, but other than that, the story was a joy to read. I rate it 7.5/10.
What does SFFG stand for?
7054822 *School! Flying! Falling! Goofing!* This story/chapter is a side work for my other fic. That's where it stands for.
7053130 My apologies for the issues that are noticeable in it. I'm trying to improve my grammar and punctuation when writing.
And thanks for the score!
Then maybe you want to mark it as incomplete...
7059187 Not really... Since every chapter is a complete different scenario which ends on itself. I keep it complete since this "might" progress.
So... it is actually complete.
7061662 you're adding more chapters, right? Then it's incomplete. If you're adding more content to a story, regardless of how different the scenarios are, it's an incomplete story.
7061841 It is complete how I see it. This "might" progress. It depends on the time, and if I find something to add.
I say, it is complete. With the possibilty of being extended.
This is pretty good. Well done.
7065737 Thanks mate!
I demand sequels!
Especially Applejack!
7109942 Might be something for in the future.
7118670 Shrewd very shrewd. You being so cryptic in order for me to stick around to see if you will deliver.
....[hits the follow button]. Your move.
7120958 *Pulls out a chess board*
I think I can make a quick one-shot for AJ.
7121730 Really?
I might have an idea for a story if your interested ( makes first move.) check
7125249 *moves pawn in front of the king*
I have a 1000 words already written down for your "demand"...
But I'll welcome your "idea" if it is more aluring to you..
7126271 (Prepares to block.)
Then I shall only list a few request to be used or ignored as seen fit.
1. Take AJ off the farm. Have her out of her element and showcase her versatility.
2. Don't make the guy a farmhand. It's an easy in, pun not intended, but it's rather cliche. My thought would be a member of the guard, (another unintended pun.)
3. Treat her with respect. It should go without saying, but to me and many she is a very important and indearing character, treating her like she is dumb or without moral would do a great disservice.
(Prepared to move...realizes has no idea how to play chess, slaps the board and RUNS!!!)
7126539 Oooohhhhh...
I can certainly work with that! I'll scrap everything I had.
)
I'll see if I can live up to your expectations. ( You can have the first say when it is done before I publish it.
Edit: No... I have something better... I'll make the one I'm writing... And I'll make yours as a follow-up chapter...
How's that?
7056081 Does that story have sex in it too?
7343683 No. It is "teen" rated. Although it does have more adulted actions in it that has to do with light teasing and "fantasising".
Those heated moments is a "clop" version with ideas of what "could" happen.
I admit, the first of the two spoilered kinks in the description almost turned me away, but I stuck with it and quite enjoyed it.
Though given the two are already parents and are working on a second, I'm not sure what definition of "casual" you're using...
7661507 The "casual" mention is more to say that there is no real kink in there besides, well, that.
Happy to see that even while you had doubts about the story, you enjoyed it to an extend.
7662567 Oh, I very much enjoyed it, such that I want to read the fic it's a spin-off of. It's just that I'm used to "casual" meaning no emotional attachment or possibly even intent to follow up, which is something I detest. I think most people would use the word "vanilla" - though I will understand completely if you don't want to use that term, I don't understand it myself. XP
7664080 Ah! I can see how that would fit.
But indeed, I'll likely not use it. I think the word I used fits with it good for non-English readers.
I hope you'll enjoy the original story as much, or even more than this spin-off.
How many chapters of *School! Flying! Falling! Goofing!* before this story gets updated?
7763644 To be fair, I've ideas on what I can use for in this. If you really want, I can try to make some time to add another chapter which I had in mind. Although, it would likely not be long.
As to your question; there is no said amount of chapters before this gets updated. It is really about if I find the want to make another, since I'm... not a real clop writer. But if it is desired, I can try to make another.
7764456 I do want to see more chapters for this. And I'll have you know that I think you're one of the better clop writers out there.
7797222 Cheers bud.
I'll see if I can make something for you. I estimate it will be published before the 31st of December.
Good story. Some grammatical errors, but overall not enough to be too distracting.
However
This made me laugh - er - cackle.
7833067 Cheers bud! Grammar is being a bad girl again.
I thought already that that sentence read a bit odd... should have searched the word first.
A good 2017!
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Jesus im late!